The Parting

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by d_ist_urb_ed, May 24, 2006.

  1. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    hey chek these out....sorry fer spammin disturbed dude...but these are uber cool....
    its a song by flying lizards - money...

    The best things in life are free
    but you can tell me 'bout the birds and bees.

    Now gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want.

    Money don't get everything it's true.
    What it don't get I can't use.
    So gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want.
    Yeh gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    so gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want.

    solo

    Your lovin' give me a thrill
    but your lovin' don't pay my bill.
    Now gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want.

    Money don't get everything it's true.
    What it don't get I can't use.
    So gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want.
    Yeh gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    so gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT
    that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh
    that's what I want
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    There's an English lyrics forum here, u moron.
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @Bjr, <3, you finally got it done. And yeah, i'm surprised that you were the only one who pointed out that crappy rhyming. I knew i was going to get some criticism, but really, one person? Makes me wonder how closely people are actually reading the poem. And about getting literal in a verse, meh, it's someone literally dying mixed with fiction so i guess i can sort of justify it. Haha, anyways, i'm just glad that you got a chance to do it. Thanks a lot brotha, now both your boner and weaner are safe <3 ;)
    @fat_kax, Thanks dude, mind not mentioning the "fatness" in every post?
    @Cryptic, It's ok honey, bjr to the rescue <3
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one man...
    The boatman shalt not carry me to you, across the river
    Forever i shall roam the nether in your reminiscence
    As i lay here a storm upon me and tears in my eyes
    Death creeps in beside me and with my last breath

    nice verse....specially the word storm....
     
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Thank you dude.
     
  6. sayanakaharry

    sayanakaharry Forum Leader

    awesome work. fantastic way of expressing yourself.
    reminds me of a particular song. will tell you sometime.
     
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Sure thing little nigga, thanks for reading cuz.
     
  8. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Just read this now and its da shizz0zrs
     
  9. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    hah, I used to post here?
     
  10. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Yes, emoboi
     
  11. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    :')


    hah, what I can't understand is why people think I'm not emo.


    I suspect they link intellignence with un-emoness.
     
  12. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Indeed..... Thanks shsnawada
     
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    **** you. Have a nice day.
     
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Someone's happy to see me :)
     
  15. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    so do you not get my offline messages or are you just being jerk-ish and not replying?
     
  16. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Sorry, but its either extreme stupidity or ... .
     
  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

    i wonder how i missed this one...

    Sarat this is what we call a "class" .....reps coming ur way...:beer:

    PS. Thanks Suhas fr bring it up again.
    ....​
     
  18. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    **silent**

    WOW !!

    Beautiful :)
     

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