hey chek these out....sorry fer spammin disturbed dude...but these are uber cool.... its a song by flying lizards - money... The best things in life are free but you can tell me 'bout the birds and bees. Now gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want. Money don't get everything it's true. What it don't get I can't use. So gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want. Yeh gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT so gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want. solo Your lovin' give me a thrill but your lovin' don't pay my bill. Now gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want. Money don't get everything it's true. What it don't get I can't use. So gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want. Yeh gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT a little money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want THAT'S WHAT I WANT so gimme money THAT'S WHAT I WANT that's what I want, ye-ye-yeh that's what I want
@Bjr, <3, you finally got it done. And yeah, i'm surprised that you were the only one who pointed out that crappy rhyming. I knew i was going to get some criticism, but really, one person? Makes me wonder how closely people are actually reading the poem. And about getting literal in a verse, meh, it's someone literally dying mixed with fiction so i guess i can sort of justify it. Haha, anyways, i'm just glad that you got a chance to do it. Thanks a lot brotha, now both your boner and weaner are safe <3 @fat_kax, Thanks dude, mind not mentioning the "fatness" in every post? @Cryptic, It's ok honey, bjr to the rescue <3
good one man... The boatman shalt not carry me to you, across the river Forever i shall roam the nether in your reminiscence As i lay here a storm upon me and tears in my eyes Death creeps in beside me and with my last breath nice verse....specially the word storm....
awesome work. fantastic way of expressing yourself. reminds me of a particular song. will tell you sometime.
:') hah, what I can't understand is why people think I'm not emo. I suspect they link intellignence with un-emoness.
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L i wonder how i missed this one... Sarat this is what we call a "class" .....reps coming ur way...:beer: PS. Thanks Suhas fr bring it up again.....