===the Orphan===

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Luthier, Dec 18, 2005.

  1. Luthier

    Luthier New Member

    Like a flower bud wanting to bloom
    A lonely orphan makes this world his playroom
    He’s in search of the finest toy
    That gives him the greatest joy
    He knows no boundaries of time and life
    Knows not, for a bread he’ll have to strive
    He eats his meals with no one to feed
    And to his own conscience pays heed
    I know for someday he’ll be great
    And in this world will test his fate
    Though he’ll earn money
    And will have friends, mostly phoney
    He’ll still be like the wing-cut dove
    Striving to live without any love.


    I wrote this poem after watching some T.V programme about orphaned children.
    I was in tears that time.

    Please comment and critique on it.

  2. guns_n_gore

    guns_n_gore hell raiser

    good man

    nice emotions in u
    nothing in the poem
  3. all_that_rocks

    all_that_rocks New Member

    Good job dude .....
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    gr8 one....i din knew u write also.....

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