The moment of truth...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Mar 14, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    The words seem to be menacingly pointless,
    as the Moment of Truth awaits...

    It shakes your world, it really does;
    but nobody seems to care.

    You think it might offend someone,
    they feel you are a culprit,
    As you hide to make them feel better,
    they believe you hide for your own benefit.

    You feel the world shrinks around you,
    the walls seem to crush you inside.
    You feel you might wanna melt away,
    Its all so hollow inside.

    But the moment comes and passes away,
    As they become more distant than before,
    You feel to be the only being alive,
    as you walk past the graves of your own lies.

    Sometimes you feel it had never happened,
    Untruths never have nice endings,
    The days of happiness end too fast,
    Before the web entangles you to darkness.
    I do not understand,
    was it a friend or foe?
    That pulled me down from the heights,
    to fall deep down below.

    I made my own world of lies around me,
    to make others feel close in harmony and youth;
    But the thing came crashing down upon me,
    'twas that dreaded, 'Moment of Truth'...




    Somtimes you think the moment had never come. has it ever happened to you?
    Something that shook your world, which even you could'nt forget for a lie........
     
  2. its compkated
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^
    complicated? why?...I thought it'd be fairly easy to understand!
     
  4. i dont knw ... i dont want to disect each line but if im right then
    I made my own world of lies around me,
    to make others feel close in harmony and youth;
    But the thing came crashing down upon me,
    'twas that dreaded, 'Moment of Truth'...

    these are the only lines u said ...for the whole moment of truth ???
     
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Its not exctly based on the moment but what happens after that moment has come'
    How you feel, and how others feel.....
    and all the 'what if's also......that you feel would've made things better!!
     

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