The Magician

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by i'm_not_neo, Mar 19, 2007.

  1. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Eventhough I wanted to elaborate this one, my friends were convinced this one is better if its short..A really simple poem...

    The Magician

    He's picking up
    what's left;
    Of this broken heart.
    He wants to begin all over,
    right from the start.
    But he knows she ain't coming,
    not for eternities,
    And so he picks the shards
    Of his broken heart.
    He doesn't believe,
    in miracles,
    Let alone a magician,
    But he needs a miracle,
    to pur her in an oblivion.
    So he prays,he begs,
    He shouts,he cries,
    "Lord help me forget the days gone by"
    And after the magician,
    will do his trick,
    you'll see this man,
    happy and free,
    It isn't a miracle,
    just the arms of a clock,
    and though he's in a bad day,
    He(God) knows he'll be fine
    As He hears the magician go tick tock.
    loyal, arpi, Subhro and 5 others like this.
  2. #iR@



    i am telling u man... u r GOOD! i mean it! i think its one of the BEST poems ritten by u... seriously i really liked it... reps comming ur way man!
  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    ^^really?Thank you so much...surprisingly this is the 1st time I'm be getting reps from you :) ...and I'm really glad to know you considered it to be one of my best:)
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hmm..yet again u've belted out a good one..there r say abt 4-5 best of the best poets at IGT in my opinion...

    ...and i see u heading there


    loved this verse
  5. god_of_guitar

    god_of_guitar New Member

    nice...nice...nice... you have talent dude... reps for u
  6. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    @vini...I'm honoured,seriously.I can't thank you enough for posting your comments and the appreciation you've been giving to almost all of my poems...that is the driving force that helps me keep making such stuff..
    Thank you for the reps..don't know how many times I said that to you..honestly I bet about half of my total rep points may be from you...not that I'm complaining :)..

    @god_of_guitar...I'm glad you liked it..and thank you for the reps..
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    no problemo..keep posting ;)
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    must say...splendidly done....u have brought forward the agony and the hope a person goes thru.

    Wonderfully done.
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    u deserve these reps im gonna give you.. excellent write, neat n simple n yet so deep.
  10. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    Great poem dude, one of the very great poems of yours I have read...

    OoOh Reps comin ure way :D
  11. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    loved ur poem. :') reps 4 u.
  12. #iR@


    told u it was an awesome poem! :) everyone like it! YEAAAAAAAAAA! hehe
  13. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    When I saw 11 replies to this poem honestly I was worried some1 spammed in this thread!!But I'm really glad to know that the 11 replies are actually appreciations of my work...

    @walk_alone..thank you.

    @nimisha...I've read your works and I must say its an honour to be getting reps from you..thank you,glad you liked it..especially since you found it simp0le yet deep which is what I always strive to do..thanks for the reps.

    @arnold_aj: Thanks man..very good to know this is one of my very bests..thanks for the reps.

    @Subhro...thank you for the appreciation and reps.

    @#iR@: Yeah,you were right about this one being good.Well I always respect your opinions and now I'll be really looking forward to them..
  14. arpi

    arpi New Member

    i can't believe ive been such a fool as to skip your writing ....i love your style....and this piece is very well written,m concise simple but deep
  15. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    @arpi...thank you :)

    No,don't be so harsh on work is often skip-able..
  16. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    @arpi: thanks for the reps..
  17. loyal

    loyal New Member

    Good job!!,
    very expressive
    reps for you
    keep writing
  18. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    ^Thank you.
  19. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    man whoever u r.. u hv all skills of poetry.. u rock..
  20. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    @Bish..thanx man...really surprised at the popularity of this poem..

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