The Magician

Eventhough I wanted to elaborate this one, my friends were convinced this one is better if its short..A really simple poem...

The Magician

He's picking up
what's left;
Of this broken heart.
He wants to begin all over,
right from the start.
But he knows she ain't coming,
not for eternities,
And so he picks the shards
Of his broken heart.
He doesn't believe,
in miracles,
Let alone a magician,
But he needs a miracle,
to pur her in an oblivion.
So he prays,he begs,
He shouts,he cries,
"Lord help me forget the days gone by"
And after the magician,
will do his trick,
you'll see this man,
happy and free,
It isn't a miracle,
just the arms of a clock,
and though he's in a bad day,
He(God) knows he'll be fine
As He hears the magician go tick tock.

 

*speechless*

i am telling u man... u r GOOD! i mean it! i think its one of the BEST poems ritten by u... seriously i really liked it... reps comming ur way man!

 

^^really?Thank you so much...surprisingly this is the 1st time I'm be getting reps from you ...and I'm really glad to know you considered it to be one of my best

 

hmm..yet again u've belted out a good one..there r say abt 4-5 best of the best poets at IGT in my opinion...

...and i see u heading there

Reps!

loved this verse

 

nice...nice...nice... you have talent dude... reps for u

 

@vini...I'm honoured,seriously.I can't thank you enough for posting your comments and the appreciation you've been giving to almost all of my poems...that is the driving force that helps me keep making such stuff..
Thank you for the reps..don't know how many times I said that to you..honestly I bet about half of my total rep points may be from you...not that I'm complaining ..

@god_of_guitar...I'm glad you liked it..and thank you for the reps..

 

no problemo..keep posting

 

must say...splendidly done....u have brought forward the agony and the hope a person goes thru.

Wonderfully done.

 

u deserve these reps im gonna give you.. excellent write, neat n simple n yet so deep.

 

Great poem dude, one of the very great poems of yours I have read...

OoOh Reps comin ure way

 

loved ur poem. :') reps 4 u.

 

told u it was an awesome poem! everyone like it! YEAAAAAAAAAA! hehe

 

When I saw 11 replies to this poem honestly I was worried some1 spammed in this thread!!But I'm really glad to know that the 11 replies are actually appreciations of my work...

@walk_alone..thank you.

@nimisha...I've read your works and I must say its an honour to be getting reps from you..thank you,glad you liked it..especially since you found it simp0le yet deep which is what I always strive to do..thanks for the reps.

@arnold_aj: Thanks man..very good to know this is one of my very bests..thanks for the reps.

@Subhro...thank you for the appreciation and reps.

@#iR@: Yeah,you were right about this one being good.Well I always respect your opinions and now I'll be really looking forward to them..

 

i can't believe ive been such a fool as to skip your writing ....i love your style....and this piece is very well written,m concise simple but deep

 

@arpi...thank you

No,don't be so harsh on yourself...my work is often skip-able..

 

@arpi: thanks for the reps..

 

Good job!!,
very expressive
reps for you
keep writing

 

^Thank you.

 

man whoever u r.. u hv all skills of poetry.. u rock..

 

@Bish..thanx man...really surprised at the popularity of this poem..