The Long Silver Mirror The kid remembers, staring at a long silver mirror as he tried to read the reflection of something he'd written, "No son,you can't read that.." said a voice with love and care, "things always get reversed there" Now he hears 2 voices yell, the ones he felt warm around, but they sound mean now the warmth all missing somehow, All hateful and loud;all bitter now.. He's scared, he doesn't know what went wrong, how could the ones who loved him most were fighting all day, treating him like a ghost? "Is it me?"He wonders.. "Yes,maybe that's it,..." "Maybe it's because I haven't behaved" Little does the boy know, A sunken ship can't be saved. Months have gone by, The kid has lost hopes now.. The hatred is at it's threshold He's worried and scared, of what his future might hold. As the mother walks by, she's confused at her son, As he sits in that corner, Her baffled mind can only wonder, at his mindless,hopeful stare at that long silver mirror...
umm... wow! all i can say is THIS is one true piece of riting... really!!! ok now u have gotten me all serious... everythings perfect just rite in place... but why the mirror? dats not very clear to me... n yea this poem has an amazing flow to it... like rhyming but not rhyming at the same time... but watever it is... was completely into the poem wen i read every single word... on a much lighter note- man u r virtuoso!!! (yup... tryin to show off my preparation for SAT! hehe) : not very appropriately used but its one of my fav words dat i have cum across...
Ok wow!That was amazingly fast!!And equally sweet I'm glad you liked it!!!! The mirror..well see,one of the parents says that "things get reversed" in the mirror..so he kinda takes it literally. *checks virtuoso in dictionary* *gets all smiley faced* lol...prepare more for SAT!!!
ok see,now that was a lot better than your previous post.Ah well....to the typical funny poem then.. Bwahahahahahahahahaha LMAO!!
Oh btw,you write poems?(Yea yeah so that I can read them and try to insult them too,you know...vengeance thing)
nope ..i don't write 'poems' most of us .aren't anywhere close to writing 'poems' ..we many a times, end up writing some uber crap and post it here ..
