-~|-The Letter-|~-

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, May 12, 2005.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    The Letter

    When i thought of love
    Never thought it would be this way
    that i'd love you but let u go anyway..

    Set me free u said
    this isnt meant to be
    the other words u said
    still delve within me
    you knew i'd die for u
    but you couldnt live with me

    And now that your there and me here
    how i wish you would here, near

    Maybe this is the way its meant to be
    you love someone and then u set them free

    notty_lad, Subhro and zoomingrocket like this.
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Rightly said Martina... When you LOVE someone... you only want happiness for him/her!
    Whether that happiness is due to your company.. or due to other's company doesnt matter!
    =>Simple to SAY.. though hard to accept! :Worried:

    But as long as the SMILES are flowing... the HEART keeps beating!

    Gud one...
    Keep it up!

  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Hey, where did u get the inspiration for this?? Are you the girl sam is talking bout in that "bizarre problem" thread?? It fits you know.

    Anyway, nice poem. well penned.
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    hey.. vry nice bubbly... i liked ur poem. keep thm comin. reps 4 u.
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    If they return back,they are yours, otherwise...!

    Nice one...Martina!

  6. skaw

    skaw snooze

    nice, just what i shuld be saying :eek::
  7. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey nice one martina....reps 4 u...
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    hey bubbly, oye oye bubbly
    gr8 kya poem hai yarr bubbly.
  9. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    something i know is right.......somethiing i cant accept...like zoom said...hard to accept...
    ur heart just doesnt buy it, as stubborn as mine is.....:cry1:
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks everyone...
  11. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Yeah absolutely right,.... but dont u think its crappy to keep thinking about people who dont give a fuk to your feelings? Its like I'll go screw someone, then I'll ditch that one n go for another one, n the 1st one would write such a poem n be happy with herself. Offcourse that would be more than a million dollar lottery for me man.

    So what i mean to say is dont fall for any one blindly, otherwise you will end up sitting sadly writing such sad poems.

    God where's all sensibility and happiness gone????

    (Just what i think, no personal intentions)
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    u dont decide u'll fall in love or u wont fall in love with someone
    and One cant assure how the relationship may shape..or start for that matter..

    if someone doesnt love u, u cant force the person to..
    um..not coming from the right person..but its true

    and i Wont term that as crappy...love is love after all..

    people write "happy" poems in happy times
    sad in sad times
    people deal with things diffrently,
    There are times people resort to writing rather than talkin about it

    can write volumes over this, but dont want to at the moment

    if anyone wants to comment they'r free to
    its ok..afterall its a forum..
  13. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Yeah,... so thats wat i said,... dont fall for it blindly, arrey bhagwan ne aankhien di hain dekhneko,.. dimag diya hain, sochneko. Y dont ppl use it before giving it in for love.

    And hellooooooo,... about deciding and not deciding, life aint any bollywood movie man, to say "Uff yeh pyar to hona hi tha" n start living with bollydremas in your mind! :p:

    haha,.. man such ppl make me lafffffffff,.....

    (Just what i think, no personal intentions)
  14. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    well said...

    @akkyy... if u become so practical i guess ul never fall in love ;)
    arrey bhagwan ne aankhen diya hai aur dimak bhi diya hai par yeh dono is dil ke saamne kuch nahi kar sakte....hehe... im jus givin u a chance to laugh at me...
  15. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    ha ha ha
  16. greenday

    greenday New Member

    it doesn't make any freakin sense..
  17. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    The poem is good , good feelings and emotions behind it and a good portrayal of them.
  18. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Anniversary of "The Letter" ;)
  19. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    all the 10 characters I need to post this appreciate it.
  20. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks Bjr
    PS- Anniversaries are a horrible thing to remember..;)

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