The Interlude

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Feb 20, 2005.

  1. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    The Interlude

    I am walking under the trees of gold
    I stop to rest my weary feet
    In the shade of Mellorn groves I lay down
    And I see how the golden leaves
    Fall to the ground

    I hear whispers, secrets I never knew
    Windy cold, the truth of my dreams
    Lays shattered now, like icy mountain dew
    And I stop to take yet again
    One final view
  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    wow.. that was amazing.. no words to say .. too great...
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Essi!!!! Great work. And I'm more than delighted to see your post. And do I even need to comment about your poem?? Its brilliant like all of ur stuff.
  4. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    liking it a lot....nice images and the way they are protrayed
  5. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Essi.. more of this, REGULARLY!

    Tats all we want!

  6. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    It's a wonderful poem, esgallindeion. Hope U are gonna post the next one very soon.
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Essi.....amazing dude, simply amazing. Keep posting bro, this site misses you sorely.....
  8. rev

    rev New Member

    esgallindeion, That poem was .... rich. And beatiful too. Have you by any chance read " Lord Of the Rings"?
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    ^Yes, he has. As far as I know, he is very much into the books.
  10. rev

    rev New Member

    tejas: Can't you recognise a rhetoric when you see one? Juz Kiddin! It's quite obvious that essi swears by that book. You can easily see tolkien's essence in the poem. ( No offence, essi)

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