I sit in my study, i try to find The moments of carelessness, I had when i was a child Going to school and coming back, Playing with your friends and hitting the sack. Where in the transition did I lose the Childhood, The innocence in my eyes, the mischievous spirit of my mind All i can think of now is Love, Career and hope. Love from my friends and family Career for the better future and hope that my dreams come true If only we could forget everything for a minute. No worries, no mistakes and no cares for the feelings at stake This world would be free Free from the slavery the man has created for itself. Free from the shackles of the earthly thoughts. But my wish shouldn't be permanent As the human nature is, we would never realize the joys of childhood if we were children all the time. That my dear is the beauty of it. cheers ankit kaushik...
Anyway, you have a choice to become your mischevious-child-self anytime. Its just that ppl are too concerned about others around them, and behave in a predictably boring fashion throughout their lives. IMO, child though gullible, has got a real indepedent thought and feeling, and the more we grow up, the more "follow the herd" things creeps up (perhaps subconciously)
Ohk, so u r ankit kaushik n u wrote it... cool... Carry on the job brother... N wt happened to yr band? I guess u wr abt to start a band aftr yr xams...
didnt find tym to do dat man.....bin busy wid one thing or da oder since den..........luks lyk i will hve to wait for another 3 or 4 months.....
nice thought but not well developed .. u could have used some serrogates and examples and put hide the thought a little ... that realization of loss of innocence is not what ur lines express, they are too blunt to evoke curiosity intrust
yea i knw.....i neva thought dis poem was worth typing and posting on da net......bt den i thought wat da hell......