The illusion of freedom

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 28, 2016.

  1. This pen is not free
    cause the language is not
    i cant express the way i want it manu

    "it rained last night" was i there or i said so cause i saw the wet grass
    where is the word to put the visual
    dont give me a bunch of more words ...
    again i dont mean to shut u up
    ..how do i tell u this "shut up / but respond"
    your simple verbs and their ritualistic endings
    just that ..just that much to express the fine shade of sparking blue i saw in the droplet last night

    these biased snaps to perceiving nature, cutting it into blocks of presentable concepts and emphasizing only the pre-known faces
    the cube shaped chines water Mellon bull-shit
    i know why it is
    its u oh language
    most of these walls u put around with your conspirators
    these groups that speak u
    now ur a slave to them & those who write need u
    thus a slave themselves

    dont make those pseudo-intellectual monkeyed expression
    give me
    Some more to say water different name as per the shape of the object its held in
    some more even to express the ages of people i am storying these visuals to
    Some more to cross the present perfect boundary of this lingo and put has on my writing today

    Let me see the way i want to,
    live it with all its shades
    i dont need to tell it to ur large groups
    i dont need your illusion of freedom
    i will keep it in my secret diary,read it, watch it, smell it.
    so much that the "it" is no more "it"
     

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