The Hurt Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sharmontime, Jan 28, 2006.

  1. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    The Hurt Heart

    The pain unknown to the hurt heart
    deprived of love,betrayed by life,
    the poor thing is no more.
    Isn't realizing the time at all,
    though hours passed-since its death.

    Fear of love
    the lovely dove
    went away moaning.
    Doesn't understand
    the heart's plight
    thinks she's right.

    So what!Yet the heart strives to live
    Saying,it has much to give
    to this world of innocence and darkness.
    So comin' back is that legend,
    in the new avatar of a brigand,
    to steal the love of its dove
    that hides in the mango grove.




    This one's i wrote on the night i proposed a girl for the first time whom i have been loving since 1995...
     
  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    F.L.I.R.T>>
     
  3. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member


    what do u mean by tht? me a flirt?
    if so...i make it clear...i am not one.



    n e ways ppl....no comments?no reps???
    btw atleast tell how's it.........
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    keep working on ... u have great potential.....dont leave anything ;)
     
  5. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    thanks madhuresh...that's taken me high....shall work now more harder. :)
     
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i have one in hindi for the same feeling's........

    Abb tum se kyaa batayeen kis imtahaan main hain
    Bazoo thake hueea hain phir bhi udaan main hain !!

    keep posting
     

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