the girl

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Apr 16, 2005.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    Tangled in her own fears,
    bides her time over the years.
    A face hidden she shall remain,
    the mask behind which she stays.
    Painfully scratched hollow,
    the insides become.
    Turbulent in sensation as the sun.
    No soul to confide,
    bear the truth she hides.
    A closed Pandora's box,
    key locked and swallowed-lost.
    She can change,
    if given the chance,
    only waiting for that one glance.
    Running she shall go,
    into those arms if thrown.
    But she shall not be considered,
    for her fate holds no luck.
    Happiness not allowed,
    only broken dreams handed down.
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  2. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    how old r u preetha.. u write such intense stuff at such a young age :shock: amazing.
  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    WHOA.........lotsa angst there.........reps 4 u
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    OMG :shock: :shock:
    A-W-E-S-O-M-E ......
    repssssss 4 uuuuuu...
  5. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    erm j i'm 17...this poem means alot to me, therefore i guess thats way it contains a lot of emotions
  6. netrumpus

    netrumpus New Member


    thats real deep .. :)
    nice ..real nice ..
  7. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    all her poems r deeeeeep stufff :)
    nice 1's. :) chk out her prev poems :)
  8. light_of_erindi

    light_of_erindi New Member

    Very nice....I didn't get ur previous poem...this one made more sense to me.:)
  9. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    lol glad it made some sense!! but then again we all get different interptations
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  10. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    gud one.reps for it.surely got that gud selection of words and scentence formation.
  11. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    she always does!.... after all she is my sister :p:

    only jokin sis..... id give u reps if i cud but instead i give u points :grin:
  12. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    are you talking shes really ur sister or all indian as your yer brothers and sisters???
  13. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    lol no he actually is my brother.....genetic relationship there!

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