The Gifted

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hardik, Sep 17, 2006.

  1. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    Hi guys! Dont ask! I know...have been away for long long time..
    met some ppl from here on orkut and online too..so bas yaad aa gayi IGT ki;) :rock:

    This is a poem i wrote for an event in our college...it was for the visually impaired and handicap children..or rather the differently abled children..we had organised diff competitions for them...and for the "normal" public...der was a poem writing compi...i kept this simple coz had to read it to an audience...won the 3rd prize:rule:

    here it goes...




    :beer:
     
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Now this was Wonderful Hardik....Well deserved prize...keep on :rock:ing....

    & yeah...:):) <---- ur favorite ...a pair of smiley :p:
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    amazing.....
     
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    no wonder..u won the prize...beautiful thought.more so>
    anyways..reps :)
     
  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ah! replies...thank you Garima :):) nimisha n vini..thanks a lot!

    Edit: i just noticed the 4th green dot! yipeeeeeee....:rule:
     
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    there was a spelling mistake in failure and dimension...sorry....aadat se majboor :p

    about the poem-
    good theme and not very deep, easy to understand
    i felt one line change our perception
    could be added, jus dont know where it could fit


    congrats on the prize;)



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    PS-tame time malse toh scrap nu jawab aapso >:p IGT yaad aawse, IGTwale nathi!
    (thats all ahmedabad could teach me in two months) :'(
     
  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    AMAZING!!!!!!!! *speechless*


    awesome! :nw:


    well deserved prize! :)
     

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