The Gifted

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hardik, Sep 17, 2006.

  1. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    Hi guys! Dont ask! I know...have been away for long long time..
    met some ppl from here on orkut and online bas yaad aa gayi IGT ki;) :rock:

    This is a poem i wrote for an event in our was for the visually impaired and handicap children..or rather the differently abled children..we had organised diff competitions for them...and for the "normal" public...der was a poem writing compi...i kept this simple coz had to read it to an audience...won the 3rd prize:rule:

    here it goes...

    vini, nimisha and Garima like this.
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Now this was Wonderful Hardik....Well deserved prize...keep on :rock:ing....

    & yeah...:):) <---- ur favorite ...a pair of smiley :p:
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    no wonder..u won the prize...beautiful thought.more so>
    anyways..reps :)
  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ah! replies...thank you Garima :):) nimisha n vini..thanks a lot!

    Edit: i just noticed the 4th green dot! yipeeeeeee....:rule:
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    there was a spelling mistake in failure and dimension...sorry....aadat se majboor :p

    about the poem-
    good theme and not very deep, easy to understand
    i felt one line change our perception
    could be added, jus dont know where it could fit

    congrats on the prize;)


    PS-tame time malse toh scrap nu jawab aapso >:p IGT yaad aawse, IGTwale nathi!
    (thats all ahmedabad could teach me in two months) :'(
  7. #iR@


    AMAZING!!!!!!!! *speechless*

    awesome! :nw:

    well deserved prize! :)

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