The Dream - Part II

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by mudgalbharat, Mar 4, 2006.

  1. mudgalbharat

    mudgalbharat Silence Must be Heard

    Before proceeding, please read the 1st part at

    that old tree with huge branches
    is now dry and falling apart
    it can no more support a tree house
    the dream has fallen apart...

    I am in the office and its noon,
    Like everyday I call you up
    and ask you to take your lunch
    but you already had it,thats pretty soon!!

    The office hours are over now,
    I call you to leave work, and go back home.
    Like always I wait for you on the way,
    an hour passed by, why dont you answer my phone.

    Its midnight and i cant sleep,
    recalling me and you climbimg the mountain.
    I have faith in the giant stillness and climb it again
    this time alone,I talk to it and share my pain.

    what's killing me is the uncertainity,
    No clue as to what has gone wrong.
    I dont take that you have betrayed
    our love, afterall, is like an eternal song.

    you call me up and say want to talk,
    I tell you i will be there, but i am stuck in a jam.
    i leave the car and run to you, to save my love,
    25 minutes i have been running...and in a truck i slam.

    I call you up and you finally answer the phone,
    I tell you I am trying but i cant walk anymore.
    you come to pick me up and i find you so cold,
    the stone-eyed girl i've never seen before.

    Its dark and we walk the same road, no hand in hand,
    the sound of the leaves when we walk.
    No birds chirping, like me they too are
    afraid to listen to what you are gonna talk.

    The moon is rising as we walk on,
    The silence is piercing the tree leaves.
    I look down so that you don't get hurt,
    its really cold and i roll down my sleeves

    We sit on the wooden bench in the garden
    and you talk of the past.
    you tell me it has been good
    but this meeting is the last.

    I hold your hand tight
    as if i will never let you go.
    I ask you not to leave me
    u tell u cant stay, and this I know.

    It started raining , there is no shade,
    You leave and you wont come back.
    to ever dance with me in the rain,
    You didnt tell me, what did my love lack.

    I cry and I cry and I cry
    not just cause i am losing her,
    for the childhood love was coming to an end,
    for eight years that I worshiped her...

    [ But life still goes the next part ]

    - regards

    Bharat Mudgal
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  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    oh boy!!!...did i jus go numb!:shock:

    The "silence" i heard was unexplainable
    thinking of editing my post in the other poem
    but then forget it...

    Best of Luck dude!
    hope things workout between u2
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    awsome....this is where realty takes over all profoundly impacting .... jus like when u force urself towards some one and he can puch u in face but he does it in ur chest (bang)...ur changing gears man ..keep the tempo...
  4. mudgalbharat

    mudgalbharat Silence Must be Heard

    Hey BubblyMartini and Madhuresh

    I have been "silent" for a long long time..ever since i joined IGT. And then lately i felt like i have been too silent...and i needed to speak...the words are just coming out of me somehow.

    Life is beautiful

    Keep Smiling :)

    - Bharat
  5. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    yeah friend is indeed beautiful..and people like you make this place a heaven to live...
    loved both the Parts....very good.
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    essence of eminem style.... nice one..
  7. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Bharat, did you say there's next part??...

    *ponders, but waits...*

    Sharmontime :cool: [TM]

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