The Dream - Part I

looking at the horizon
the morning sun is rising
we are walking hand in hand
the view is Mesmerizing .


Yellow leaves are all over the path
and their sound when we walk
birds are chirping on the trees
blessing us when they see us talk

its an old tree with huge branches
spread across through the road
you dream to make a tree house over it
and i smile and say i love u in our secret code

the sun is rising as we walk on
the sunshine falls piercing the tree leaves
we look up to see it and you are hurt with a fallen branch
knowing i will carry you, with a smile you roll up my sleeves

we sit on the wooden bench in the garden
and we think of our future
you and me, dad and mom
a family that we will nurture

i hold your hand tight
as if i will never let it go
I ask you to never leave me
u tell u wont and this I know

it started raining i look for a shade
but then you wont come and you call me
to dance with you in the rain
u know i will come, do anything to make u happy

i open my eyes and its not raining
there is no hand in my hand
all night I have been dreaming
the same dream i dont understand

i look at the horizon
the morning sun is rising
i walk alone and rub my hands
to get some warmth, this cold is agonizing

Yellow Leaves are all over the path
and their sound when i walk
birds are chirping on the trees
they dont listen anymore to those talks

that old tree with huge branches
is now dry and falling apart
it can no more support a tree house
the dream has fallen apart...

( its not the end...)

 

great.....yelow leaves adn ther sound when we walk..walking talking feeling the poem with u was amazing

 

very nice....reps to u:beer:

 

Brilliance..achieved? Wonderful work, post the second part.

 

yeah..its damn good...post the part-II

 

Thanks Madhuresh, Garima, Disturbed and Amit.
It was raining here and i could help recalling the past...and these words came to me. Will come up with the rest of the story pretty soon.

keep smiling.

 

A wonderful poem... would like to read the rest of it too

 

I like the way you've written the poem
like manu said walking talking feeling the poem with u was amazing, Fantabulous!!!..
If your still looking for "the one"..hope you find her soon...
but if you already have found her, i'm happy for u2

Best of Luck!

PS- Moving to Part II had to read this before i read that