Hi guys ... Some of my thoughts - penned, rather - keyed in IGT Rocks cinq jours and Goodbye people We're waiting for a new year A sunny day on vacation A sandy beach lights the fire of temptation in me! Holidays! On and on! Christmas night was so much fun! and now I'm drowned in an ocean of joy in me! Life is short! Life is great! No time to fight or hate! Oh Lord ... Thank you again! ... again! I feel a tremor far in the sea triggers a sense of fear inside of me Instinct tells me my time is up! All I can do is look up ... Destruction has arrived again ... The earth has shaken again ... The sea has angered again ... and the Waves ..... ... take it all away! take it all away! .... I run away ... ... away from hell as the ocean starts to swell I feel a wave just above me ... I breathe the final breath in me ... in me! ...... in me! ... The new year is here ... New beginnings, new plans What of the entire clan that was lost - to the sea to the sea! May the Force never anger again! May He never inflict such pain! The only feeling that fires in me is the fear ... of Divine Wrath! Take care and be cool
Good one. I wrote one about the same topic, its somewhere on this forum. Anyway, mine was a much more serious account, I liked yours for its simplicity. Good work.
The poem is good but sorry, i felt the mood doesnt go with that of mine. The way i look at the episode is diffrent.
