the DEPRESSED girl in my bio prac

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by death angel, Jun 24, 2005.

  1. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    it was in the bio lab that i saw her,
    i got hard,
    i saw her lick.......
    i saw her suck........
    i saw her eat the lizard....

    Her mouth full of blood, red as
    lushly wine....
    im an insensitive sob, but could see her heart
    was cryin

    i cud hear it wail right thru
    her chest
    it was sobbing, sighing shouting
    in unrest,

    i saw her calm down when to her
    i proposed..
    i heard her sweet voice say to me,
    now composed

  2. shak

    shak Harrr!

    4/10 .... not tooo good deathy .. yo can do better mate ..
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    They are getting boring now. The first ones were good, now it seems all too familiar. Try something different.
  4. dharmatma

    dharmatma Banned

    i havnt checked ur earlier stuff...

    but i found this fckkin gross and hillarious.
  5. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye: proposed that dracula?? really did??..:p:
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    this thing was rerallyu funny man!you can do better ones take ur own time.
    but the other verses sucked big time!
  7. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    thnx ppl...
    @Shahrukh thanx for leading me so truthfully and honestly... im grateful...
    @dharma youve read one bfore... i keep track of all ma reviews....
    @tejas and shahrukh...... sorry for having disappointed you.. but i tried stepping into a diff arena to be humiliated bigtime...(ask rocking_devil ;))
    @rocking devil....keep criticizin i need to know when im wrong....
    @bokachoda(nik)..... be strong.. don be so girley... but keep postin
    @ others..... post when you see ma posts or threads... even if they resemble rockin devils...
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    dude!are there any other new girl in your bio practical or even physics or chemisrty pracs!
    im dying here to get one from u soooooooooon!i can see ur tooooo busy with studies that u aint showing up like u were before!
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Thank god it was Lizard... beware man.. if u really want 2 remain man.. ;)
  10. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    you are so right!!!!!
    i was on a frenzy during my summer hols so i had all the time in the world to write poems and stuff... now i hardly find time to get online....
    thanx for your reviews... (as far as i remember you gave me the "$hit in your face" remarks but anyhow....)
    ill try to find time to write some more....
    (doesnt it sound like that old filmy "dying hero" walla dialogue???)
  11. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    Looooooooong Liiiiiiiiiiive Deeeeeaaaaath Aaaaaaaaangel!!

    @vishwa the wierdest gai on da planet -- does anything of your post make sense?
  12. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    gai--u mean cow...or in bihari cau...
  13. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    i mean a cow!

    LEFTY_GUITARIST -= M®. §öU†|-|ÞäW =-

    @dethy.......dont ur school got chem/physics pracs???

    y always bio??:p::p:
  15. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    actually i dont have bio pracs.... only phy and chem
  16. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    I guess something really made some sense.. otherwise u r not that non-sense that u will reply to a sense less post....

    vishwa ;)

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