it was in the bio lab that i saw her, i got hard, i saw her lick....... i saw her suck........ i saw her eat the lizard.... Her mouth full of blood, red as lushly wine.... im an insensitive sob, but could see her heart was cryin i cud hear it wail right thru her chest it was sobbing, sighing shouting in unrest, i saw her calm down when to her i proposed.. i heard her sweet voice say to me, now composed JUST F OFF YOU AS*SHOLE!!!!!
They are getting boring now. The first ones were good, now it seems all too familiar. Try something different.
this thing was rerallyu funny man!you can do better ones take ur own time. but the other verses sucked big time!
thnx ppl... @Shahrukh thanx for leading me so truthfully and honestly... im grateful... @dharma youve read one bfore... i keep track of all ma reviews.... @tejas and shahrukh...... sorry for having disappointed you.. but i tried stepping into a diff arena to be humiliated bigtime...(ask rocking_devil ) @rocking devil....keep criticizin i need to know when im wrong.... @bokachoda(nik)..... be strong.. don be so girley... but keep postin @ others..... post when you see ma posts or threads... even if they resemble rockin devils...
dude!are there any other new girl in your bio practical or even physics or chemisrty pracs! im dying here to get one from u soooooooooon!i can see ur tooooo busy with studies that u aint showing up like u were before!
MANNN!!!! you are so right!!!!! i was on a frenzy during my summer hols so i had all the time in the world to write poems and stuff... now i hardly find time to get online.... BUT thanx for your reviews... (as far as i remember you gave me the "$hit in your face" remarks but anyhow....) ill try to find time to write some more.... THANK YOU FOR ALL THAT YOU DID FOR ME!!! (doesnt it sound like that old filmy "dying hero" walla dialogue???)
Looooooooong Liiiiiiiiiiive Deeeeeaaaaath Aaaaaaaaangel!! @vishwa the wierdest gai on da planet -- does anything of your post make sense?
I guess something really made some sense.. otherwise u r not that non-sense that u will reply to a sense less post.... vishwa
