Just putting it out there... THE DARK ALLEY... The dark alley; The desperate beating of a heart. She's Alone; Petrified and yet composed Somewhere in the distance she hears music- Soft, slow music-bringing back the Memories- Just for a moment-then she is back; Inside her-things fall apart. Dreams shatter; Drowning in a Puddle of Sorrow; Reality sinks in-and she weeps-weeps like a baby. Like a hungry baby; for love, comfort, security--Answers. For a place called Home. Alone in the alley. The place begins to cave in, becoming smaller, Making it hard for her to breathe. She turns-only to find darkness. The Dead End. It was hard—she could have done so much. She longs to run-run-out of life. ~*~ whadya think?
for a moment...i thought, u were describng me.. when i was in such a situation...!!!!! gr8 petunia.... reps for u..!
sad ... makes me appreciate the life that i have ... nicely written raff ... a good change from all the love-hatred-sorrow inspired poems around here ...
Nice poem petunia. Its kind of a nice free verse....difficult 2 write Its got a nice flow..................bythe way i am new to IGT THis is idefixe.......i havealso posted a couple of poems........take a look and do post those commemts....bye for now would like 2 hear frm u soon,,,,,take care
Emotions nicely expressed...! I love your style ! Do keep sharing your awesome works Take care Amanush...
@idefixe: hey man, welcome to IGT...thnks and definitely will keep a lookie for ur poems. keep rocking. @bjr..awww, thanks bro. Always look fwd to ur cmments. Too bad i banned the pirate boogie..or we cudda done a little skit together. @hardik: YOU DA MAAANNn!! :rock: @ amanush: thanks man. Im like a emotional-musical waterfountain... blow spontaneously :grin: wonder when the next time'll be when ive got the sense to rite about!
