The Curse - II - The Reprise

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Mar 26, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    So a saga ends with a happy ending.....

    Estranged from happiness,
    and cleansed by loneliness,
    The wanderer chose to stay.
    The world that gave him everything,
    took them away one day.

    He struggled to live alone,
    He who loves human company.
    Now has birds and beasts to contend with,
    Would this be his destiny?

    He knew too well the words,
    that sealed his fate.
    So he did'nt cry for that he did'nt have.
    Life chooses a few to live without worries,
    and destiny always favours the brave.

    So the wanderer chose to stay,
    As happiness melted away.
    This is all, but no pain
    can endure so long, as this man
    will, to fight to sustain.
    He will start afresh,
    immune to the harries of loss,
    he pledges to fight till he lives.

    He knows life is'nt too harsh,
    It might throw in a surprise.
    He'd not mess up this time,
    So he waits for his reprise.
  2. why dont people respond to such an art
    reps added ...this was simply art ... i truly admire ur efforts and height of thoughts here !
    Only thing i would like to add is: the braves go to grave, without make-up without shave...alone and naive
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    what can i say......m overwhelmed........
    thanks a lot......
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I guess people not responding is their own opinion of likings....the number of views to the thread might suggest a few more things
    Seems like judging a book by its cover!
  5. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    its been the most awesome read ever!
    and dont worry bout meagre comments., people here r too dumb to understand
    keep posting!
  6. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    its a great series-poem, in fact rare ones I enjoyed readin. like those epics of homer
    you're worth comparision really, only difference being that you use modern language!

    keep posting!

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