the cryin' messenger

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by varmas11, Mar 3, 2005.

  1. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    I try to dissolve the chains which just constrain
    and find the light and let go of the plight
    and within the curtain, I take a peek
    to find the force and to let it speak
    and shine beams of light when it gets dim
    on a path to truth -- our universal whim
    and so I take all I got, all of this
    let it shine for the soul to attain bliss
    yet no one’s listening, does no one seek ?
    if my soul had blood, pools of red would leak
    it's not black and white, or A and B
    why don’t you see ?
    we drops meet in the sea
    …it’s innate destiny…
    …the ocean of unity…

    gospel --> [hook]

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  2. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    hey vermas ( ever rocckin ) whr is this thing taken from ??
  3. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    what do you mean man ?

    i wrote it, if that's what you're asking ?

    the verse and hook is my plan for the song...

    it's all from a songwriting perspective

    take care bro,
  4. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    if you meant source of inspiration, i got a thread of fire from rahman's 'yeh taara'

    it says like all drops are an ocean or somethin like that

  5. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    Heheheh. Verma! now don't b shy and tell Bob abt wat's he asking????
  6. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    yo i am confused, what are you saying nadish ?
  7. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    this is my work

    i was reading over the threads that i started and it seems if there was some confusion on this one. i didn't steal it from anywhere, i was just envisioning how it would be in a hip hop / alternative kind of song. the lyrics are mine and i hope nobody thinks that i'm just copying lyrics from other ppl or songs and pasting them as my own because to me dishonesty in something so pure and so true is just straight up treason. take care guys
  8. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    dat poem rockd :rock:
    reps 4 u.

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