The bird Just like the bird I want to fly High, above the skyline Where no one can reach me Forever and ever I will live there alone In the clouds colder than your soul U could just dream of me Once I am away No chains could grip me That is all I can say I want to fly like a free bird And rule the skies Follow my dreams And my desires I will be free forever Away from u And I think that will teach u the lesson Of being untrue! comments plzz... always looking forward to them!
^Wonderful poem, but try to put this statement in perspective, the one single sole reason (apart from the fact that i cant write) that i dont write poetry is because it makes you transparent, a person can learn much by reading between the lines of your poetry.
"Where no one can reach me " aisa kaise hoo sakat hai Gori...hummm kanfujiyaa gaye..........good lines
@ amit82cse... thanks a lot mate! @ bubbly... thanks gurl! its always great to read ur comments! @ disturbed... thanks a lot for ur thoughts man! i have a feeling u should TRY riting once... i think u can rite pretty well... @ subhro... MEANS A LOT MAN! :nw: @ nimisha... thanks! @ madhuresh... :shock: *AHEM* *AHEM*... thanks man!
I see you as a fledgling.. waiting to take flight! Cute poem... reminds me of my earlier ones actually
Amazing..too good...:rock: few words i would like to say : Flying up above Filled with love forever Within the sky a lantern The glow that's always there I'll stay with you forever We'll travel through the sky as now My wings are yours to fly...