I wrote this song after watching “The Accident” episode of The Wonder Years, the TV show back in Feb. last year. Last weekend I decided to compose it and recorded the first version of it. Better one is in progress with some potential collaboration with some mates. Here is my first audio version of it. Audio: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=537688&songID=4961596 Also at: https://gdhar.com/2007/02/03/the-accident/ =========== Words: She lay there still, wrapped in her sheets Everyone tried, but she couldn’t sleep I know she was hurting deep in her heart I watched her cry, I watched her feel Pain that was burning, no one could see I know she was falling - falling apart Holding back tears, longing to say Wanted to tell her, “Love I will stay” There by her door out in the cold Standing and wondering why we let go Oh, I remembered when we were one Still there she was, girl I once knew Deep in her heart, she loved me too I knew we’d find our way in the sun Though we had grown so far away Wish I could tell her, “Love I will stay” All through the night, I stood and prayed That’s when she saw - standing me there Lord, I could feel pain in her eyes And with her smile - I know she said “Oh I remember love we had shared True love’s a feeling - it never dies Come take my hand, promise you’ll stay Oh, till the stars all fade away.” Gautam Dhar Written: 10th February 2006 Composed & Recorded: 3rd February 2007
nice lyrics..will listen to it soon. is "wonder years" still on air? the last time i watched it on tv was nearly 7-8 years back..anyways iL give song's feedback on ur msg board..reps comin ur way
wow...thats truly amazing...the last line is simply excellent. "Come take my hand, promise you’ll stay Oh, till the stars all fade away.” Great work. btw,"Just Another Song" was also very good.
ur poem reminded me of ma poem that i posted here too... it had the same title THE ACCIDENT... but i must say ur work is surely a job well done!