the sun rises, spreading radiance, raising a smile upon my face. A thousand doves cant repay my debt. a sense of guilt emerges, for my wrong doings. and i hang my head in shame. the strings of sweet melody ring in my ears, sailing me off to unheard bliss where the ice is broken and misunderstandings unknown. The flashes of stars, racing across the sky, capture my wish with one wave. The fire has burnt dry. the teenage anger realised, thanks to you. an end to a chapter, unwritten and blank. full stop.
I absolutely love the imagery in your poems. I think I need to take a class from you about imagery. Great stuff. Keep it up!
"the ice is broken" .... how in hell's name didya think of that ? man, i like it... tejas is absolutely right, the imagery you use rocks...
hahaha thank u..it not that gud *blushes* this is like a part 2 of a poem i've dun b4 which i shall post later....i was very down etc and my friend helped me and this poem is dedicated to him