Thank you

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shashankgothic, Jun 30, 2009.

  1. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    In my life I have lost some things, twice.

    I had forgotten how to smile,
    how to see bit further, beyond this misery.

    I had forgotten how to be happy,
    how to trust anyone, give them power over me.

    I had forgotten how to be me,
    buried everything deep inside, hidden from others.

    You taught me how to smile again,
    to laugh without reason, to cry from the joy.

    You taught me way to be myself,
    made me reveal what I am, to give someone power over me.

    You taught me how to be happy,
    to feel that warmth inside, to believe someone cares.

    Thank you for revealing my error again,
    showing that path of tears lie in sorrow, not in joy.

    Thank you for taking it all away,
    making me to hide myself again, to trust no one.

    Thank you for telling I am nothing,
    pointing my place, to be outcast by my own choice.
  2. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Simple words and beautiful and honest thought......i really liked it.
  3. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    thaxxx yaar . i really waited for a rev\iew... read my other poems as well
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    great poems.... thanks for posting

    keep rocking
  5. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    thanx dude ,, ur appreciation keeps me going
  6. distorted

    distorted satan

    nice job...

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