terric lair and 2 blue eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 28, 2009.

  1. the most terrific lair, met a pair of blue eyes
    he abused her body all night...dark shades turned bright
    square at a distance from the folds of cotton and smell
    the shining dusky skin, yellow sun. dark hair
    some parts hidden some bare in-pair...couldnt dare
    couldnt make-up... couldnt put that face, tell he's a lair.. how ditch spells
    in semi-hot water he dwells, waxed in her innocent smell...ahh hell
    went for purchase, amused he fell
    put a note with some notes with coffee and french fries..
    drown within a feeling, in a hurry realize
    that last nignt
    the most terrific lair, met a pair of blue eyes
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    the way thoughts can be dramatised...hmmmm
    wht u had in mind when u did this, if I may ask?
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    i saw the replies to last 17 poems and it was like none crossed a double-figure mark...

    sad day for IGT poetry world
  4. this was a fluke ...sw somthing ...got some thing ...penned it

    for IGT its good response rate.... i love the dampness of this palce !!
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hmmmm.....keep thinking! n posting!

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