Tere Liye...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, May 17, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Tere liye… Apne sapno ka mahal tod
    Sagar kinare rait ka ghar banaya

    Tere liye… Bahaaron ko rukhsat kar
    Patjhad ko nyota de dala

    Tere liye… Apni ankhon ko moond
    Apne ansuon ko duniya se chipaya

    Tere liye… toofano ko gale laga
    Pyar ki dastaan ko mit ta paya

    Tere liye… Ujaalo ko andheka kar
    Andhero mein kadam badaya

    Tere liye… Daaman mein kaante bhar
    Izzat ka ajeeb dau lagaya

    Tere liye… Dard ko apna aina bana
    Jhooti hassi ka mukhauta chadaya

    Tere liye… Wafa ki seema tod
    Bewafai ke tohmat ko apnaya

    Tere liye… Zindagi ko ruksat kar
    Apni khushiyon ko tadapta paya

    Tere liye… Nazron ko kuch is tarah phera
    Ki Tabahi ke raaste pe khud ko chalta paaya

    Tere liye… Tere pyar ko rusva kar chali
    Har din har raat teri yaad ne reh reh sataya

    Tere liye… Tere bin jeene ki koshish mein
    Hamesha har pal tujhe apne kareeb paya
     
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) good to see that u hv started posting here too...its always a pleasure reading them when it comes from U....
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thik thaat attempt....
    ye line hai na
    Tere liye… Apni ankhon ko moond
    Apne ansuon ko duniya se chipaya
    this can be changed i mean annsoo rooke to ander kuch bheega rakhne ko ...or kuch mitane ko ...i mean new usage of ansoo, vo bhi inside...i know i sound foolish but serious soocho to its new
     
  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ garima... thanks

    @ madhuresh... interesting suggestion. But i wanted to stress on the fact that "for you, I didnt even share the pain with the world, didnt let them see my tears". Hope you get what i m trying to say
     
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Varshita Ji...! Bahout acha likha hai aapne...! Hamein khaas ye lines ache lage :

    Tere liye… Tere bin jeene ki koshish mein
    Hamesha har pal tujhe apne kareeb paya


    Younhi likhte rahiyega

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks amanush
     
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hey Very Good attempt.. a message and meaning deep down there somewhere!!

    Reps coming ur way :)
     
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks vini. Yah... very few can really relate to and understand whats behind the poem.
     
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  9. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^I understand whats behind it .. that too clearly ;)
     
  10. ^ me too....but yup poem is really good...reps
     
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ mohsin :-| Shouldnt you be working?? And not using (read misusing) office resources for non-official purposes? :p
     
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Devilshly .. Thanks
     
  13. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    @Varshita .. good change of topic .. but no work in my hand right now .. so .. just "USING" the office resources LOL :p
     
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You are one 'vaila' person :)
     
  15. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ^^he dosent know what VAILA means.
     
  16. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    nice poem gurl! :)
     
  17. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    tere liye.... reps..
     
  18. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    make a song out of it:)

    i liked the theme and how its been put
     

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