Tera aana......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, Mar 7, 2006.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Tumhaare aane ki aahat se,
    Aa jaati hai…..

    Meri muskaan,
    Meri Khushiyaan,
    Meri khikhilahat …….aur…..
    Khil jaati hai hazaaron kaliyaan.

    Tumhaare aane ki aahat se,
    Mil jaata hai .…..

    Mera Chaiin,
    Mera karaar,
    Mera sukoon……..aur……
    Cha jaati hain jeevan mein bahaar.

    Tumhaare aane ki aahat se,
    Shuru hoti hai……..

    Meri hasrat,
    Meri muhabbat,
    Meri chaahat……..aur…….
    Jaise baahon aa jaati hai saari kudrat.


    Tumhaare aane ki aahat se,
    Jawaan hoti hai……..

    Meri dhadkan,
    Meri tadpan,
    Meri chitvan…….aur……..
    Machalne lagta hai mera tan, mera man.



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  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^kinda kiddish .............. good effort though ......
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    their a world in hindi chul-buli.......
     
  4. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Aap ne likha acha hai anum aur aap ki is poem main kaafi masumiyat ki jalak nazar aa rahi hai...

    keep writing
     
  5. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    bahut bahut shukriya babydoll, madhures and apurbajd.

    aap logon ke inayat hai ........
     
  6. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    hehe.. u seem 2 be in deep deeeep la la la luuvvv.. :)

    nywys, sweet, simple n nice poem. :) reps 2 u. tk cre.
     
  7. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    ur right shubro, I am deeply in love for last 5 years......so ....it is too obvious in my poetry.
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    not a kiddinh poem at all.........may sound that way but its actually tough to compile

    gud work.
     
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    this may look kiddish... but it has potentials to turn into great song....
    alaas... songs with simple lyrics are appreciated most..
     

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