i wrote this yesterday, not a poem actually, just kindaa lyrics about the youth n energy n karisma of this age. Tej raftaar, Tej raftaar, Tej raftaar hai.. aatishon pe junoon sawaar, na bass me dil yaar hai.. Josh hi jahaan, Josh hi khudaa, Josh sarkaar hai.. guitar pe baji, zindagi ki yeh, Mast zankaar hai.. Tej raftaar hai.. Rokane ki aur Tokane ki, Koshish bhi bekaar hai.. Sabr se Kaho, Sabr hi Karo, ke dil me khumaar hai.. Tej raftaar hai.. Beikhtiyar hai, zindagi magar, jaana yeh bass yaar hai.. Saanse chali hai, Aur khalbali hai, ke Maut gaddar hai.. Tej raftaar hai..
that looks more like some songs lyrics if u play come distortion chords in background can turn out to be a nice song liked the lyrics though..... ( i may give that a try if am free in holidays)
For God's sake I donno why people use "j" in place of "z" and vice versa. I dislike to read it that way. Its TEZ not teJ and its Jhankaar not Zankaar.
arre its maraathi people's style of writing...dont u remember manjrekar's zhol..hehe but i dont understand its logic though
i can feel something else shayad ...tumhe ye raftaar acchi lagi ya kuch choota ja rah hai...u knw its like when ur in a train and everthing going back ..Now 2 situations ...going back home (to excitment) ...and leveing ur people for long( supressed sadness) actually this line...Rokane ki aur Tokane ki, Koshish bhi bekaar hai..it dosent matches the other things ...Kuun ???
