tehzeeb

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Sep 21, 2013.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    inhi bhari bhari c galio mein
    kuch kone wale ghr hain aise
    bheed mein bhi tanha se
    suhaane mausam mein bhi patjhad k jaise

    yahan aahat c koi na hoti hai
    kisi kone mein behosh padi tehzeeb bss roti hai
    dabi hui siskion mein raat guzar jati hai
    sooraj ki kirne nit naya andhare sang laati han

    sab kaam saleeke se hote hain yha prr
    bss avaz nahi hoti hai
    koi nahi janta
    ya jaankrr b anjana hai ye sach
    ki in band kvado k bheetar
    tehzeeb boht roti hai ..
     
  2. an awesome poem..very well written ..hindi itni saaf basha hai ki bus ...i love the truthfullness of the words and you did a very good job capturing the entire scene ..bahut khoob !!
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you ^_^
     

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