tear in my eye....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Dec 14, 2005.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    I wish i could be tear in your eye

    Don’t think i'm telling you a lie

    I'll start from your ocean-deep eyes

    Then fall on your lovely cheeks

    When i'll be passing beside your lips

    Wont you catch me on your finger tips

    Then i'll dissappear in the air

    To show you,for you how much i care

    And if you think dear oh my

    To be a tear in my eye

    I wont let you to try

    And i wanna tell u reason why

    Cause in fear of losing u i wont cry

    Rather than crying i'll prefer to die

  2. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    I wud love to be tear in ur eyes..
    Born in ur eyes..
    Live in ur cheeks
    and die on ur lips..
    But if u were a tear in my eyes..
    I wud never cry.. coz never wana loose u..

    ^^ summary of that poem.. Good work.. :beer:
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    if u both were tears i wul take u both in a mug put some lemon + ice and make my nimbu-pani .....(no offences ment)
  4. #iR@


    ^ lol........

    nice poem........ :beer:
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    I've read something similar to this before..

    infact jus yesterday a friend msgd..vishwa's summary

    Do mention if its your poem
    NOT accusing you of anything...jus past experiences;)
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^hey Bubbly....remember wat u r referring to ;)
    Nice explaination Nimisha....of 'that' summary:)
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @ nimisha

    ur poem seems so familiar :)
    but anyways its nice!
  8. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    She is a nice poetess beacuse she converted that SMS into a poem.. :beer:
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    if u find my poems familiar..thre may be two resons...

    1)i have posted it in another few websites earlier...

    2)i have habit to to convert one thought in to poem.. so sometimes thoughts r known to all, i just make them poetic.......

    n yes.. i will specify when its not my poem...

    happy to know ur views guys!!
  10. wolfblitz

    wolfblitz New Member

    nice poem
    finally i read something that isnt dark n dreary[not like i didnt enjoy those cryptic:}]in this forum
  11. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    kewl!!..nothing like it :)

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