tear in my eye....

I wish i could be tear in your eye

Don’t think i'm telling you a lie

I'll start from your ocean-deep eyes

Then fall on your lovely cheeks

When i'll be passing beside your lips

Wont you catch me on your finger tips

Then i'll dissappear in the air

To show you,for you how much i care

And if you think dear oh my

To be a tear in my eye

I wont let you to try

And i wanna tell u reason why

Cause in fear of losing u i wont cry

Rather than crying i'll prefer to die

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I wud love to be tear in ur eyes..
Born in ur eyes..
Live in ur cheeks
and die on ur lips..
But if u were a tear in my eyes..
I wud never cry.. coz never wana loose u..


^^ summary of that poem.. Good work.. :beer:

 

if u both were tears i wul take u both in a mug put some lemon + ice and make my nimbu-pani .....(no offences ment)

 

^ lol........

nice poem........ :beer:

 

I've read something similar to this before..

infact jus yesterday a friend msgd..vishwa's summary

Do mention if its your poem
NOT accusing you of anything...jus past experiences

 

^^^hey Bubbly....remember wat u r referring to
Nice explaination Nimisha....of 'that' summary

 

@ nimisha

ur poem seems so familiar
but anyways its nice!

 

She is a nice poetess beacuse she converted that SMS into a poem.. :beer:

 

if u find my poems familiar..thre may be two resons...

1)i have posted it in another few websites earlier...

2)i have habit to to convert one thought in to poem.. so sometimes thoughts r known to all, i just make them poetic.......


n yes.. i will specify when its not my poem...

happy to know ur views guys!!

 

nice poem
finally i read something that isnt dark n dreary[not like i didnt enjoy those cryptic:}]in this forum

 

kewl!!..nothing like it