Tanhayi mita de..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by knights_diwani, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Just another try at writing my feelings out....

    Kho diya tha apne aapko
    Doob gaye thay tumhare pyaar mein
    Pyaar ko deewangi kehte thay jo...
    Woh kya jaane kitna maza tha uss deewangi mein

    Apna sab kuch tum pe luta chuke thay
    Aansoo ko khushi mein badla tha aapne
    Har ghum ko khushi bana li thi humne
    Marte dum tak saath nibhane ka waada kiya tha

    Kho diya woh sab najane kis wajah se
    Khushi bhi ab toh ghum lagne lagi hai
    Behne lage hai aansoo har pal inn aankhon se
    Kitni yaadein sata ne lagi hai

    Ye kis anjaane raah pe chod diya
    Tanhayi ke hawale karliya
    Tadap taa jaa raha hai ye dil
    Kehta hai"Sanam tu phirse aake mil!"

    Bass ab ye meri tanhayi mita de
    Mujhko phirse apna bana le
    Bhool jaa beete huey kal ko
    Pyaar se bhar le aaj iss pal ko!
     
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    *phew* who the hell wud say that u live in UK??? such lovely poem....good hindi there...
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wah wah wah....aur kuch kahuun kyaa..well versed...

    ye knight kaun hai .....aur kitni ladkiyaan pagal kareega......
     
  4. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @ garima thanks!Nice 2 get a comp 4 my hindi seen as its not my language!
    @mad thnks 4 ur wah!
     
  5. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    WOW!wow wow....I can't believe it!!!!you write so well...
    "Beauty with brains!"Perfect line for you fats!
    British born girl... indian @ heart,who wouldn't want you!:)Good to see england has some good girls!
    My advice to you dont stop writing!
     
  6. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    There's loadsa nice girls around boi...:)
    Thanks 4 ur comments !!
     
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    beautiful poem.
    :think:
    *wonders how people can come up with good poems one after the other ...day after day !!
     
  8. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @ knight_ki_gf thanks!
    I dont knw myself how i end up writing but its jus all piled up inside & now its all coming out on 2 paper i guess....
     
  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    check your points!!!!!
     
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    veru gud ...diwani. its amazing how u people come up with such stuff so often...:beer:
     
  11. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @Amit thanks really sweet of u!
    @walk_alone Thanks alot!
     
  12. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    B-e-a-utiful...you write really good..reps from me...:)
     

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