Tanhayee....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Apr 7, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Yeah....thats rite...
     
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  2. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    why "Akela" and not "Akeli" ?
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^cos i wrote it for some1 else....trying to b at his place....thats y u wud see Akela...
     
  4. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    ek poem mere liye bhi...pleaseeeeeeeee...
     
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^ahem..ahem...i think i shud start charging to write a poem...:grin: :eek::
    few days back my friend was after my life to write a poem for her....seriously...evry time she wud see me there is just one thng that wud come in her mind....& I ended up writing a poem for her :annoyed:..:mad: though i got a poem in return(written for me:mad:)...usko bhi poem likhne ki beemari dal di maine....he he
     
  6. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi garima,
    great work.
    reps for you,i really liked your creation.



    purnima ke chaand ka aur amavas ki raat ka,
    suraj ki lalima aur garima ki garima

    in sabka koi jawab nahin.



    regards,
    Souman
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :nw: :nw:....Thank you Souman for taking time out to go through the poem....hope to see u again n again :grin:
    Thank you...
     

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