Tanhayee....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Apr 7, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hi Guys,
    I wrote this one way back for my friend who asked for some lyrics on the similar lines of ‘Yeh hai meri kahaani-Zinda’ …as I dint hear anything from him in regards to this for so long….. I thought of sharing it here….
    Don’t know how far I have succeeded…here it is…waiting for ur comments.

    Tanhayee...

    Tanha chala tha,
    Tanha hi hoon mai
    Zindgi ke is safar me
    Akela hi hoon mai...

    Saath de na saka koi mera apna
    Para mujhe apni uljhano me tapna

    Wo sapne
    Wo apne
    Kahan kho gaye

    Ye andhere
    Ye khamoshiya
    Ab apne yaar ho gaye...

    Aarzooan ke samandar ko mil na paya koi kinara
    Mushkilo ke waqt mai sirf dhoondta raha ek tinke ka sahara

    Tab kahin se mere zehen me ek awaaz uthi
    Tu kamzor nahi hai
    Tu akela nahi hai
    Jo bhagwan hai
    Tu bhi wahi hai
    Bas uthne ki der hai
    Hath uthake asma chhoone ki der hai

    Jalta raha mai
    Tapta raha mai
    Ek anjana sa intezar karta raha mai

    Ab intezar hai to bas meri aarzoo ko kinara milne ka
    Mere is kafir dil ko ek thikana milne ka.


    Thanks for reading :cool:
     
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Strong lines...
    Beautiful Lyrics....
    Keep writing...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    hailaaa.......awesome...............jus aweseom......speechlesssssss..............


    tumhari poem dekha to ye khayal aaya,
    saala ye ladki ne bhi kya dimaag paaya !!!!!!!!
     
  4. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    lovelly....!!
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    abhi...puri padh ke bhi kuch khaas haanth nahi laga...main ek baat to daave ke saaath keh sakta hoon "ladkiyaan jyada gehra nahi soochti"...haha...Boys r boys.....;)
    vaise good try
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Bahut hi sundar....bahut hi madhur.

    aapke gaane ke bol bahut hi aanand pradan karne wale hai.
     
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Wonderful lines.....Garima! Keep it up!
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Shalabh.....thanks man for being the first one to post & m glad that u liked it:)

    @Abhi....dont b speechless...Khamoshi dobara banani paregi :p: ...& yeah, kya sher mara hai....khud sher bhi sharma gaya hoga...:p:

    @Raj...Thank you

    @Madhuresh...:confused: Thanks for reading :eek:: adha adhura sahi...

    @Pamposh...Dhanyawad dost poori kavita padhne ke liye...;)

    @Sanjay....Thanks Alot :grin:

    well....i guess this is for the first time I am replying to All Guy Group...:grin: Thanks Alot all you guys....he he.
     
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Good! U are learning to reply everyone....... :p:
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^I do reply to evryone :eek::.....i guess so...:eek::
     
  11. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I'm really :eek:: to see U :eek::
     
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    good lines garima...
     
  13. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    that friend must have been really special coz u must have stressed ur mind a lt to get such beautiful lines


    reps to u if it permits


    ps can i add that poem to my page will include ur name at the end n if req a link to ur igt id?
     
  14. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    WOWWWWW!!!!! AMAZING! this should SURELY be turned into a song! GREAT WORK! :beer: reps if allowed...
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Nimisha...Thanks for being the first lady to reply here ;)

    @Spy .... I PMd u with the answer....Thanks again for reading :grin:

    @Hira...*sigh* well...it was suppose to b composed as a song initially....but then...u kno how lazy ppl r ;) thanks for ur reply :):)
     
  16. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    haila..kaha hai sher??? .....:aggre: ..*goes to get his gun *:p:
     
  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^:think: woh jo nakli sher tune mara tha uske liye koi nakli sher hi dhoondna parega *goes to post an ad in classifieds for a Nakli sher*
     
  18. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    ^^ oyess....apun deal in originals...no naklis.....hehe..* opens yellow pages to search garimas boss ka number *........work .....hehe....
     
  19. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Abhi boss ka naam leke darane kii faaltoo koshish mat kar....hamari team ne pehle hi usko bohot daraya hua hai :p:
     
  20. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    ^^ eh...was it to be turned into a song or something....???? you were sayin somethin like that :think:???
     

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