Tanha akele

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by EP/*rocks*/, Mar 19, 2009.

  1. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    Ab kaise chaloo

    ,tanha akele

    ,uss raste pe

    jispe kabhi tum saath thae!!!!

    Dundhoon kahan

    wo lamhe

    saath tere jo guzaarey!!!!

    Itna hi bata de ae bewafa ab main jaoon kahan, tanha akele...

  2. kuns200

    kuns200 New Member

    kuch maza nahi aaya...
    may be u got hurt my someone recently.
  3. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    just a bit compression and that could end up in a couplet, a triplet maybe......!!
  5. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    to monica

    what hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
  6. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    beautifully written bro. just cheer up. I knw wat it feels like dude........da lines fit perfectly on my situation.......
  7. dr_dracula

    dr_dracula New Member

    once i wrote a song "arz kiya hai....
    bhula sako to bhula do usey
    bhula diya hai jisne tumhein
    bhula naa pao to peelo sang
    yaad rakhein hai jisne tumhein
    saki dal dal dal,saki de peela peela
    sharab ke sang ansoo hi
    de mila mila.

    so howz that???
  8. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    kya baaat hai!!!!

    kamaal hai yaar poori nazm mein dard ka nichod hai !!1

    cheers!! hats off bro!!
  9. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    thanks brother!!!!


    what happened to you?

    are you also hurted by someone nearer to your heart and soul???

    share if u want only?/

    sorry if i had written over my limits!!!!
  10. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    yea....bt m over it......almost....lol....
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    seen more good poetry from you than this..
    so guess its just an expression.. good though for a poem though
  12. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    true.....can i complete the poem bro????? or atleast add a few thoughts for u...if its ohk wid you...
  13. distorted

    distorted satan

    @angel: need sum cannabis dude? I've alwys helped friends get outta such things... Free fr u...
  14. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    haha.....no thanks buddy......m all fyn now......i dont reeli care bout dis shit..........

    first dey break our hearts den wen we become regular flirts or strt checking oder chicks out left, right and centre to get over them....dey call us casanovas.....lol...
  15. distorted

    distorted satan

    True brother... Happens wid evryone... Hv a gud tym... But its also a kind of relief wen u hv a breakup... Feels bad fr a few weeks, but once u get ovr it, u feel gud... So relieved, no more chik pik, u can booze freely, go to pubs/discs wid odr hot chicks who were once out of yr coverage area!! There's a lot more to xplore....
  16. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    why not??? you'r always welcome bro!!!carry over..

    plz !!! bro

    at one place you'r calling me bro

    and at the other asking my permission ????

    plz do what you want to do its all yours....
  17. jazzbox

    jazzbox His X Ln C 1000CC

    Yeh poetry hai ??
  18. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    nahi hum uch neech ka papda khel rahe hain......
  19. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    Thnx bro...will get back to you in a few days.......

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