Take Care of My Moon...!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jul 15, 2005.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    To the world, it is time to say goodbye
    Evening is knocking,so I have to depart
    Till dawn,you’ll see me not up in the sky
    Still part of me will remain in your heart
    Where I am going.., to this I can’t reply
    Nature will send you it masterpiece of art
    My glow in her will shine all that time by
    And her stars will be here from the start

    Sorrow upon her face a picture has drawn
    But to contemplate her will be lovers few
    For inspiring poets, her beauty is renown
    She will shed her love as droplets of dew

    Take care of my beloved moon until dawn
    I'll return back to give you my love anew...
     
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  2. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    coooooooooool!
    post more
    i can't rep u this time
    it sez that i have to spread repo b4 givin it back to u
    otherwise i wud have!!
    hope more!!
    post more hindi one's!!
     
  3. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    really nice poem amanush ...

    you should be writing more , really would love to hear more from ya !!!

    cheers ..
     
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    gud stuff man, keep it up!
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Amanush!!
    as always i love this poem too!

    your poems are simply the best!
    why dont you publish a book or something?
    I really hope you do :)
     
  6. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Nice to see that you like this one too...Somendra!

    Thanks and take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  7. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating...Bobby!

    As long as I receive your encouragements...I will try to write!

    Take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  8. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks...Rocking Devil!

    I have written this one in the Italian sonnet creator Giacomo Da Lentini's
    style...!He used ABABABAB CDCDCD as pattern!

    Keep coming and take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  9. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Hi, Martina...!Nice to see you!Thanks for praising so much...!

    Hmmm...publishing a book? I'll have to think about it! :think:

    Keep coming and take care...ok?

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  10. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey amanush... good work ya... u simply write very nicely...
     
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    yh..do give that some serious thinking..:)
     
  12. Punnu

    Punnu New Member

    TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOd.....Amanush...keep it up....reps for ya.
    TC
     
  13. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating...Screwdriver!

    Take care

    :)
     
  14. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    When I'll publish it,I will send you an autographed one...Martina !

    :)
     
  15. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks so much...Punnu!

    Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai?

    :)
     

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