Tabs submmition- Choda do anchal

I tabed few lines. Please comment.
Here it goes-

E 7-5--7-5-----7-5----5-
B ---8-----8-8-----8-7-
Choda do Anchal Jamana Kya Kahega

E -9-7-5-9-7----7-5-----7-5-
B------------8-8----6-7-----
In adayon Ka Jamana Bhi He Dewana, Jamana Kya Khega

Enjoy! and comment

 

more like


-7-5---7-5-----------------------
------8------3-3-5--8-8-8-10--

chod do aanchal zamana kya kahega

what do u think?
nice try though
:rock:

 

Good attempt. If you like correction...here it is...


E 7-5---7-5-------------------5----------5-7-
B ----8------------5--8--8-8----8------8-----
G ------------7-7----------------------------
Choda do Anchal Jamana Kya Kahega

E -10-7----10-7---------7------7------------------------5-----
B ------10-------8-8-10---10-8---10----------5--8--8-8----8---
G -------------------------------------7-7--------------------
In adayon Ka Jamana Bhi He Dewana, Jamana Kya Khega

 

cool tab man!!! hat off to u amit82cse

 

Ah.,...you activated a year old thread...reminds me my begining in IGT...:beer: