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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vini, May 5, 2006.

  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender


    I wonder what a bizarre phenomenon Time is..

    Sometimes I feel it just rushes past you in a blink
    Sometimes I feel its frozen or too slow for me to see it blink

    But since long, Time is on a run for me
    I look at the Calendar and pages flicker in front of my eyes

    Why am I living each day as a second?
    Why it starts to end just before it begins?

    The day is at hand, when these eyes would beam lifeless
    The day is at hand, when this brain will start decaying
    The day is surely at hand, but I’m clueless

    Each day I feel my grave coming an inch closer
    Each day I’m losing my will to try and remain stronger
    My hair would remain black but soul grey and grey would be my future if I don’t stop this time from running

    Suddenly I start to feel lightened up with my determination
    For I start to pretend I know not that time wasn’t started to stop…
    phew! :Tongue2:
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    bahuut time se aisa time nahi aaya jab timely time saath de...
    this attempt of ur's is rich, have no words ki daad de...
  3. goog one vini...
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx guys..im just glad that u found it comprehensible atleast..haha
  5. magicalaks

    magicalaks New Member

    good one hombre~~!!!!!!!
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx "hombre"
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    indeed a good one
  8. s/ash

    s/ash New Member

    yeh !! u're right ,, Time never started to stop ,, and no one ever can STOP it ,, you've got good sense of thinking @ Vini ... Aprreciated !! cheers!!
  9. metal_fan69

    metal_fan69 To Live Is To Die

    Nice one.. i Like it..
  10. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx :banana:
  11. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ^^iam goin bananas after reading this..
  12. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    :Laughing: after reading or seeing this> :banana:

  13. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice poem vini..
    but why phew????
    was this an exhaustion after thinking such a breath taking, heart racing thought?
  14. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ^ yes..."phew" for mental drain :p:

    thanx 4 reading sweety!
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    lovely lines....
  16. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ^ thanx garry dearest !!
  17. #iR@


    @ vini...WOW!!! AMAZING! :)
  18. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx! :Tongue2:

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