Yet another poem...but this one is the last one coz I have my exams soon... This poetry forum is like completely addictive.... Seriously I don't know what the title should be..I got it wrong for this poem but I felt it somehow fits the poem to some extent... Unique. Yeah thats the word just made for you Coz as crazy as it may seem everytime I'm with you you you drown out all the pain. everytime I see you, I fall in love with you all over again. I'm really tired now Each day seems like the first date Time seems to stop My face gets flushed in red And just like a mushy song's refrain, I feel like I'm falling in love with you, all over again. So I'm deciding to finally ask her,to marry me to free this heart from this sweet poison, and share a love deeper than the deepest ocean, And end my so called "first-love bane" And yet I'm so goddamn sure, Every morning that I'll see you I'll fall in love with you all over again.
initially i thought this was any odinary work ...but it some how created a cozy feeling ..sweet poem ... "So I'm deciding to finally ask her,to marry me " aur iss ke baare main ...yar abhi tu keh hi de
@madhuresh ...your comments/opinions are welcome...and thanx for taking the pains of reading this poem eventhough u thought it was "any ordinary work"...do continue to read all of my "ordinary works" coz you're one of those who always give an honest opinion... @hira...thank you for letting me know the title was good and liking the poem.. Cryptic_angel and walk_alone...thanks for those compliments..means a lot for newbies like me.