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You have a very nice voice. That song just happens to be horribly overdone and it wasn't very good in the first place so I didn't like this much..
cons: the intro plucking was wrong..... wrong chords in the intro too........ did you forget the lyrics or were just too embarassed to say "bhen chod sutta"?? you need to seriuosly need to learn the chords of this song........ the lead and the vocals in the last part were not matching..... slightly overdone like bjr said.... pros: you have an excellent voice!! keep going.... just make sure play the right chords of the songs you play... also you have to get into the song while playing it.....enjoy the song and get into the mood of it....... but keep going and you'll definitely come up!!! :rock: cheers! :beer: p.s.:if you're a beginner dont pay heed to my comments....if you wanna become a pro, i suggest you do.....
i also listened to your "baatein kuch".....you and excellent voice! but your guitaring skills need a lot of refinement........if you wanna be a singer dont worry.......but if you wanna become a guitarist then start practicing..... just make sure the chords are right......ask your teacher or someone.... and dont take any of these crits in the wrong sense......
Never heard this song, so can't say much about it! Agree with BJR and Sukrut about your voice, its very nice and the vocals are good aswell, except some tiny Sur faults. Take care and keep posting man!