Suggest me a title please..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Seher, Jul 7, 2006.

  1. Seher

    Seher New Member

    This is my first post to IGT.. I have tried to write something and I hope it is liked..

    The time ticks away..
    But your memory has still not faded..
    I still feel the freshness of your breath the first thing in the morning..
    I still see you smiling at me from a distance..
    I still can imagine myself holding you in my arms..
    But thats what I feel..

    When I am wide awake..
    I know you are not around..
    I know you are not there..
    I still want you around.. But destiny wants something else..
    Years have gone but I still stand where you left me..
    Alone with your memories..
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Sorry abt mistaking u to be a guy earlier.. the same used to happen to me when I was new to IGT ;)

    It's a short n simple poem, so a similar title would cut it I think... How about something like "Still Alone".. Ah, well, I dunno... But it should be simple :)
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hey seher,
    your first post is indeed very good.Its short and simple.
    One thing, sometimes you just dont get the right title so dont worry about it it.
  4. Seher

    Seher New Member

    Thank you so much for your encouragement
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    how about " still standing " ?
    poem is mast !
  6. Seher

    Seher New Member

    Thanks Madhuresh..
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    good poem ....

    no suggestion for title though!

    Keep writing ..
  8. Manish_ob

    Manish_ob New Member

    Hi Seher,

    that's really good short & Sweet like ur Name

    about Title i sggested that it should be-: "FOREVER YOUR'S"

    Keep it up

  9. Seher

    Seher New Member

    Thanks for appreciating my first attempt..!!
  10. #iR@


    nice work gurl! hope to read more of ur stuff...:) regarding the title... i would say... ummmm... "ALONE"
  11. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    walk_alone kaisa rahega?????

  12. peaceful_words

    peaceful_words New Member

    i dunno bout the title or anything, i guess i would probably agree w/ other guyz...but the reason i m posting in this thread is just to let you know that your name is very's same as ma sis.....i miss her... : '(
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    to start with...B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l Name u hv...thats in my 'list' since a long time bk ;)

    for the poem...lovely lines..expresses the feeling appropriately...
    as far as title is concerned...i cud thnk of just one
    Time: Failed to fade Your memories (I kno its a lil long for this 'short n sweet' Poem of urs :))

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