This is my first post to IGT.. I have tried to write something and I hope it is liked.. The time ticks away.. But your memory has still not faded.. I still feel the freshness of your breath the first thing in the morning.. I still see you smiling at me from a distance.. I still can imagine myself holding you in my arms.. But thats what I feel.. When I am wide awake.. I know you are not around.. I know you are not there.. I still want you around.. But destiny wants something else.. Years have gone but I still stand where you left me.. Alone with your memories..
Sorry abt mistaking u to be a guy earlier.. the same used to happen to me when I was new to IGT It's a short n simple poem, so a similar title would cut it I think... How about something like "Still Alone".. Ah, well, I dunno... But it should be simple
hey seher, your first post is indeed very good.Its short and simple. One thing, sometimes you just dont get the right title so dont worry about it it.
Hi Seher, that's really good short & Sweet like ur Name about Title i sggested that it should be-: "FOREVER YOUR'S" Keep it up Cheers Manish
nice work gurl! hope to read more of ur stuff... regarding the title... i would say... ummmm... "ALONE"
i dunno bout the title or anything, i guess i would probably agree w/ other guyz...but the reason i m posting in this thread is just to let you know that your name is very beautiful...it's same as ma sis.....i miss her... : '(
to start with...B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l Name u hv...thats in my 'list' since a long time bk for the poem...lovely lines..expresses the feeling appropriately... as far as title is concerned...i cud thnk of just one Time: Failed to fade Your memories (I kno its a lil long for this 'short n sweet' Poem of urs )
