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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by flyingbird, Dec 24, 2005.

  1. flyingbird

    flyingbird New Member

    hi friends
    i m not getting right title 4 this poem
    can u suggest
    the 1 which is in my mind is- TU

    Tu meray Dil kay Kareeb hay,
    tu meray Khaab ke Tabeer hay.
    meri haar Baat main, meri Chahat main,
    Har Taraf har Jagah, tera hi Saath hay
    hoon Akeyli to kya huwa lekin,
    tu mere Dil ke to Aas-pass hay.
    Rona nahi ata mujhe kyon ki,
    tu meri Khushi ki Buniyad hay.
    nahi Bhata koi Chehara mujhe,
    teri Sedge ka mujhay Khumar hay,
    hoon main Magroor kehtay hein Sab
    Mujhay to bus tumhara Guroor hay.
     
    flyingbird, Dec 24, 2005
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  2. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    u got a really nice poem there....btw same thinkin.... i thought the name "TU" also...
     
    har1s, Dec 24, 2005
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