HELLO PPL!!!!!!! i am BACK! yes yes my xams r OVER!!!! and tehy went pretty well! just been through a LOT lately! and just rote this.... hope u guys like it.... and just one thing i want u guys to know that .... i am not really sure if i should be posting this poem here.... but chalo khair hai everyone has their own believes! but i guess its more of a religious poem and yes one thing i DON"T want any discussions regarding the theme of the poem! thank u ppl! and here goes..... STRONG FAITH! My prayers for u His blessing on u Will always be showered on u Be it at the crack of dawn Or last streak of light Just believe in urself And leave the rest to Him He has His ways for all of us on earth For He is the One and Only, The Absolute and the Pure! Don’t worry when u r lost in the darkness His Mercy will always prevail He will help u in times when u have no support Just work hard And maintain ur strong faith Be it in the fears of life Or in the decisions that fright Just turn to Him And He shall grant u with the best For He is the One and Only The Absolute and the Pure! THANKS PPL! hope u guys liked it... and yes as always.... COMMMENTS WELCOMED!
wonder why no one replied.. its good hira... was this an attempt of maska-polish to god.. after ur exams, for good result??
@ nimisha... THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCH! :nw: haad hai... waisay i have noticed kay igt ko KUCH HO GAYA HAI! koi reply nahi... : ANYWAY... nah not really... waisay he likhi thi! thx again
wow yaar...im really touched..very nice choice of theme...very very very nicely expressed!!...thanx for sharing Reps fo sure
@ pamposh... THX FOR READING! i am glad u replied! :nw: @ jocelyn... thx a lot! ur appreciation is wat keeps me going! @ vini... THX GURL!!!!!!! MEANS A LOT HAVINH SUCH COMMENTS FROM U! @ dirt_nectar... thx for reading man... its about faith in the SUPREME being of ANY religon once u guys read it but i have ritten it for MY GOD! u guys can take it watever way u guys want too... I GUESS THIS POEM WASN'T BAD! cause its been here for like almost a month and NO ONE REPLIED!!!!!!!!
Well when I appricate something, I make sure it is known...The reason I like it so much is because that is what I belive in "FAITH".. with faith anything is possible! you just need faith
@ devilishly... THX A LOT! yea have been riting for quiet sum time now... all ma stuff is posted here on IGT! will b looking fwd to ur comments!
aree main iss liye nahi bola kyoon ki ..thik thaak hai dont u think agar main hard work aur baki sab bhi karuunga to upar vala kyaa kare ga ....aisa likha tha thoda thoda main karuunga kunchum kunchum u deal to bol mere maulla varana main chaluun....... nahi i mean just a thought...
Its nice hira...it reminds me some lines i read somewhere... When you reach on hill, just jump, two things may happen, either he will catch you or will teach you how to fly...this is trust!!!
Again, hira sweetheart, a tribute poem, so you know isnt as enrapturing, but seriously, relatively speaking, you write wonderfully, good work, pick some abstract themes the next time :beer: Love yer writing girly.