Strong Faith!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, May 15, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    HELLO PPL!!!!!!! i am BACK! yes yes my xams r OVER!!!! and tehy went pretty well! just been through a LOT lately! and just rote this.... hope u guys like it.... and just one thing i want u guys to know that .... i am not really sure if i should be posting this poem here.... but chalo khair hai everyone has their own believes! but i guess its more of a religious poem and yes one thing i DON"T want any discussions regarding the theme of the poem! thank u ppl! and here goes.....


    My prayers for u
    His blessing on u
    Will always be showered on u
    Be it at the crack of dawn
    Or last streak of light

    Just believe in urself
    And leave the rest to Him
    He has His ways for all of us on earth
    For He is the One and Only,
    The Absolute and the Pure!

    Don’t worry when u r lost in the darkness
    His Mercy will always prevail
    He will help u in times when u have no support
    Just work hard
    And maintain ur strong faith

    Be it in the fears of life
    Or in the decisions that fright
    Just turn to Him
    And He shall grant u with the best
    For He is the One and Only
    The Absolute and the Pure!

    THANKS PPL! hope u guys liked it... and yes as always.... COMMMENTS WELCOMED! :)
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    wonder why no one replied..
    its good hira... was this an attempt of maska-polish to god.. after ur exams, for good result??
  3. #iR@


    @ nimisha... THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCH! :nw: haad hai... waisay i have noticed kay igt ko KUCH HO GAYA HAI! koi reply nahi... :eek:: ANYWAY... nah not really... waisay he likhi thi! :p thx again
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Iam not the best person to comment on your theme so would keep mum.
  5. jocelyn

    jocelyn New Member

    @ "#ir@" Nice i realy liked that . Reps up . :)
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    wow really touched..very nice choice of theme...very very very nicely expressed!!...thanx for sharing

    Reps fo sure
  7. dirt_nectar

    dirt_nectar New Member

    nice one.....umm but for whom u have written it?

    i watched da vinci code yesterday!!lol
  8. #iR@


    @ pamposh... THX FOR READING! i am glad u replied! :nw:

    @ jocelyn... thx a lot! ur appreciation is wat keeps me going! :)


    @ dirt_nectar... thx for reading man... its about faith in the SUPREME being of ANY religon once u guys read it but i have ritten it for MY GOD! u guys can take it watever way u guys want too...

    I GUESS THIS POEM WASN'T BAD! cause its been here for like almost a month and NO ONE REPLIED!!!!!!!!
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  9. good one #IR...ur Id is to difficult to type..neways..reps girl...keep going...
  10. jocelyn

    jocelyn New Member

    Well when I appricate something, I make sure it is known...The reason I like it so much is because that is what I belive in "FAITH".. with faith anything is possible! you just need faith
  11. #iR@


    @ devilishly... THX A LOT! :) yea have been riting for quiet sum time now... all ma stuff is posted here on IGT! will b looking fwd to ur comments!
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    aree main iss liye nahi bola kyoon ki ..thik thaak hai

    dont u think agar main hard work aur baki sab bhi karuunga to upar vala kyaa kare ga ....aisa likha tha
    thoda thoda main karuunga kunchum kunchum u
    deal to bol mere maulla varana main chaluun.......

    nahi i mean just a thought...
  13. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Its nice reminds me some lines i read somewhere...

    When you reach on hill, just jump, two things may happen, either he will catch you or will teach you how to fly...this is trust!!!
  14. #iR@


    @ madhuresh & amit... THX GUYS! :)
  15. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Again, hira sweetheart, a tribute poem, so you know isnt as enrapturing, but seriously, relatively speaking, you write wonderfully, good work, pick some abstract themes the next time :beer: Love yer writing girly.
  16. #iR@


    @ disturbed... THX A LOT!!!!! yea... ur posts always amke me smile! :)

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