Hi All, When i looked myself in the mirror today i found a stranger smiling at me.. she made me ask myself.. and i replied.. Whats my fault if you don't like me.. i don't care what you feel for me.. its the emotion which breeds in me.. its the love which was cryptic in me.. I am a liar if i say i don't feel for u.. I am victim of desire if i say i hate u.. yes i dream of we two being together.. if its love yes it is and will be forever.. I am not going to make any big promises.. don't know also can meet ur expectations.. but onething i promise i will be there always with you caring loving n making u smile.. Hold my hand and we will walk together through the distance of life that we cover it doesn't matter u love me or not.. i loved u.. i love u and will love u forever the stranger in the mirror was laughing after listening all lines, she was blushing.. she looked at me and said why r u worried.. i will tell you all truth before u get burried.. ~Bish.
The illusionist???? ----thats my biography! Stranger in the mirror???? -----thats my past poem! hey its all copyrighted by me!!!! now i need to take some serioz action! hehe... btw nice poem.. but dont u feel end is bit abrupt? couldnt relate it with poem easily.
Interesting concept man..very creative. I liked the whole "I love you even if you don't" theme...could relate a bit to that.. This is a sort of minor flaw but it'd be better if your poem was grammatically correct too...not that its very wrong or so but especially stanza 3 and a few other places need minor corrections..but of course,readers will correct it for themselves so you can keep it the way it is.. Overall the poem was pretty expressive and the theme was clear..
i cant imagine such a situation is the stranger behind ur image or in front of it or like a fairy on tip of ur head ??....lol but nice poem only this Hold my hand and we will walk together through the distance of life that we cover it doesn't matter u love me or not.. i loved u.. i love u and will love u forever......this is like crap u culd hv added some other thingloke u grabbed the stanger and got her out in the real world....possible na !
nice concept madhuresh.. ya it cud be tried.. but i don't edit my poems once submitted.. will write sumthing new.. thnx man..
