straight up

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by varmas11, Mar 30, 2005.

  1. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    straight up, the ego pounds within
    my fire is stronger, yet no blessins
    fake sparks you ignite only to die
    cause you can't feel this level so high
    beyond time and space
    into blissful daze
    expression is truth yet people forget
    anything is written without introspect
    do you feel the words you speak and right
    in the depths of your soul and blinded by light
    walking by feel and not by sight
    does the word let you let go of the plight ?
    naw cause people are fake in here
    you need to ask yourself, not some seer
    so much praise for that which is incomplete
    maybe poetic, but not a spiritual feat
    these threads of logic seem to collide
    untangling thought but never does it subside
    cause this truth just ain't comin
    from mind or body, it ain't happening
    so the inner child I deny cries for praise
    and love to raise
    the child of innocence
    to a union of consonance
    disappearing dissonance
    but I know deep down the **** is fleeting
    two dualistic sides keep on fighting
    but there is a middle ground and truth
    ego and knowledge made me forget the root
    it's all love
    it's all love
  2. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    well done i like it!
  3. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    for the first two-thirds of the poem, i was confused about what you were getting at...but the last part says it all... good work.
  4. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    thanks for the props guys
    awaiting more feedback

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