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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nik_bokacheley, Dec 16, 2005.

  1. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ..lolz.. while sitting idle doing nothing I thot of writing something.. And, here's something that came to my mind..:)

    While I was walking ,
    I found a white stocking.
    I picked it up with care,
    my eyes had a glare.
    Stocking turned pink and blue,
    WTF I had no clue.
    It turned into gold,
    but the stocking was old.
    I will soon become rich,
    once I get rid of my hitch.
    Gold oh gold I've got,
    but what was it never thought.
    I went to a shop,
    at the gate there was a cop.
    He checked what I had,
    he saw the gold and was glad.
    I sold the stocking at 2 dime,
    had a dinner which was fine.
    Next morning while walking,
    I found a black stocking. 
    Please don't criticize, I aint a poet and aint good at writing things...:p:


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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    As u mentioned nik that u r not a poet & r not gud @ writing things......well i disagree ...cos this was indeed a nice effort...it has some kinda fiction story...& it rhymd aswell..
    I liked it....reps coming ur way as an encouragement to write more n more :grin:

    btw, wots WTF....:think: :eek::???
  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    Hehee....... Nik ........ab jabab do .......

    btw that was good..... though I didnt get it completley ... so WTF. :p: :p:
  4. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    :eek:: Sorry that has got a bad meaning.. Anyway, if you're interested in knowing PM me.:eek::

    Thanks a lot for the encouragement...;)

    apurbajd... :think:.. Actually I myself don't know what the poem is about..

  5. guns_n_gore

    guns_n_gore hell raiser

    and then WTF happened :beer: :beer:

    nik this :rock: :rock: :rock:

    overall the poem is :insane:
  6. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ^^lolz nice say..:p: WTF must have happened the next day.. Nothing else came to my mind..:p:

  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    i say WTF :p: ......this poem even has suspense at the end...(keep wondering WTF did the black stocking turned into :think: :p: ).....great tp nick :rock: ....cool..or should i say WTF stuff:p:
  8. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    Thanks for the appreciation dude...:) I never imagined my WTF poem will be liked by so many..:p:

  9. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    i think you should change the title to Stocking-WTF.... :p:
  10. khub_mar_khabi

    khub_mar_khabi New Member

    it means wtf: What The FCuk
  11. khub_mar_khabi

    khub_mar_khabi New Member

    sry 4 breakin the suspence
  12. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    WTF is common abbreviation...! Nothing special lolz..:RollLol:

  13. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Good rhyming effect...
    Nice work nik...
    Keep it up!

  14. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ^^Thanks.. Mr. 2nd ADMIN..:)


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