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  1. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ..lolz.. while sitting idle doing nothing I thot of writing something.. And, here's something that came to my mind..:)

    Code:
    While I was walking ,
I found a white stocking.

I picked it up with care,
my eyes had a glare.

Stocking turned pink and blue,
WTF I had no clue.

It turned into gold,
but the stocking was old.

I will soon become rich,
once I get rid of my hitch.

Gold oh gold I've got,
but what was it never thought.

I went to a shop,
at the gate there was a cop.

He checked what I had,
he saw the gold and was glad.

I sold the stocking at 2 dime,
had a dinner which was fine.

Next morning while walking,
I found a black stocking.
    Please don't criticize, I aint a poet and aint good at writing things...:p:

    nIK!:nw:

    :):)
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 16, 2005
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    As u mentioned nik that u r not a poet & r not gud @ writing things......well i disagree ...cos this was indeed a nice effort...it has some kinda fiction story...& it rhymd aswell..
    I liked it....reps coming ur way as an encouragement to write more n more :grin:

    btw, wots WTF....:think: :eek::???
     
    Garima, Dec 16, 2005
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  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    Hehee....... Nik ........ab jabab do .......

    btw that was good..... though I didnt get it completley ... so WTF. :p: :p:
     
    apurbajd, Dec 16, 2005
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  4. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:


    :eek:: Sorry that has got a bad meaning.. Anyway, if you're interested in knowing PM me.:eek::

    Thanks a lot for the encouragement...;)

    apurbajd... :think:.. Actually I myself don't know what the poem is about..

    nIK!:p:
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 17, 2005
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  5. guns_n_gore

    guns_n_gore hell raiser

    and then WTF happened :beer: :beer:

    nik this :rock: :rock: :rock:


    overall the poem is :insane:
     
    guns_n_gore, Dec 17, 2005
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  6. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ^^lolz nice say..:p: WTF must have happened the next day.. Nothing else came to my mind..:p:

    nIK!:nw:
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 17, 2005
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  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    i say WTF :p: ......this poem even has suspense at the end...(keep wondering WTF did the black stocking turned into :think: :p: ).....great tp nick :rock: ....cool..or should i say WTF stuff:p:
     
    Hardik, Dec 17, 2005
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  8. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    Thanks for the appreciation dude...:) I never imagined my WTF poem will be liked by so many..:p:

    nIK!:nw:
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 17, 2005
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  9. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    i think you should change the title to Stocking-WTF.... :p:
     
    Hardik, Dec 17, 2005
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  10. khub_mar_khabi

    khub_mar_khabi New Member

    it means wtf: What The FCuk
     
    khub_mar_khabi, Dec 19, 2005
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  11. khub_mar_khabi

    khub_mar_khabi New Member

    sry 4 breakin the suspence
     
    khub_mar_khabi, Dec 19, 2005
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  12. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    WTF is common abbreviation...! Nothing special lolz..:RollLol:

    nIK!:nw:
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 19, 2005
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  13. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Good rhyming effect...
    Nice work nik...
    Keep it up!


    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Dec 19, 2005
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  14. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    ^^Thanks.. Mr. 2nd ADMIN..:)

    nIK!:nw:
     
    nik_bokacheley, Dec 19, 2005
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