hi.. posting my poetry titled as" still waiting.." i walked along the path, smiling for those who watched me, acknowledging the pain as gift thinking as destiny .. with numbness and silence beyond belief why me? asking my heart everytime why i am the scapegoat? walked on with my thoughts.. then... i cried when the reality sinks in me.. my world crumbled my dream becomes frozen .. tears poured out through me.. like the cloudbursts.... deep down i was at my lowest ebb. the sincerity with i made the edifice broken into pieces.. survival was priority..i survived still walking on the path.. saying to myself that was not the only worst i faced.. there are many more in pipelines waiting.. and .. if destiny is willing i will...again pass the test of my determination just walking alone.. leaving the past dreams..untouched by future walked thru hardest days......and still waiting...still rohit astroguru26
thats gr8 rohit.... element of experience in it im not so good at english.. but tried few lines, seeing urs... nobody is destined to walk alone.. for the distances one have never known.. there is someone to hold your hand.. when u stumble upon, to make you stand.. to see the world when you close your eyes.. to wipe your tears, to hear your cries to walk through miles, to make you smile.. to take a step ahead, when u stop for while.. for ur every pain, someone will care.. so dont walk alone, someone is there.. let ur heart go wild,let ur doubts get clear.. just take a look here, someone is near..
gr8 work astro (but yeah, like vini said in ur other thread "who am i?", do check for grammatical errors) reps 2 ya! @nimisha nice work gal, ur english seems fine to me
thanks to nimishaa and cryptu...who are more expressive in imagination for giving comments... rohit astroguru26
One more gem out of you Rohit:rock: very nice.. @Nimisha you too have written very well and your english is good too.. you have the talent girl:rock:
