limping from recent setback of loosing the way for having bread and butter but still keeping head high and walking up for few moments again harsh reality struck me down with no reason to convince... found myself stucked in the situation where i can feel neither i can go forward nor i can backward, and still confronting my fears realising what next move destiny will take.... caught up in the moral argument that is blinding the truth... wrapped up by the material considerations made me loose the sight of the various aspect of life viz blood relations,friends for whom i am the part of their life as well, standing between the whirlwind of situation that moved very fast engineered by headstrong and convincing opinion is this caused by destiny's mischief or malice? asking myself..... even i was on guard but now its difficult to cheer up the soul motivating it in dark times of this hour.. and struggling to comeout of the grip of depression as if i am trapped in dreary routine yet an opportunity in store but farsightedness is needed as it will be appearing in unexpected way..... loosing sleep over current problem passing through dark tunnels and going through testing times especially feeling deserted by loved ones..... waiting for light it seems over for just now ... rohit
yes...it looks like to me... themes are more needed to judged as whole..mistakes bound to be..and learning is another step
Hey , few modifications I have taken a liberty to modify ur poem, tell me wat i reads like now : dint make too many changes since then it wd lose it originality.