hooked to every needle pierced in every side the blood streams yet no pain clamped to sharp spikes family died before me the loss is large yet no tears death awaits around the corner can hit me any moment this doesnt effect me now i have no soul
Hmm....Honestly, I don't like it much. Sorry, but its kinda vague. Take some time out to explain a few questions like Why? and How?. Its a start, definitely, so work on it. It needs a lot more.
