soul searching...poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Oct 30, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    posting my new literary product.......soul searching inform of poetry

    what i have achieved after so long years
    still don't know rule to survive
    what i have given to this world
    the tears of joy or a reason to smile.

    seeing the sunrise i think about myself.
    what i do if i go the wrong way
    does my life will bring the cheer to anyone
    or it will hang in balance and sway.

    round the clock i wish to achieve lofty goals,
    what i will never close to those?
    am i on mercy of god to go for trying ?
    will i succed or will be a spent force?

    so many years had passed by.,
    every second takes its toll
    why i am doing it and who am i?
    my mind goes for a unknown stroll

    i talked to myself about my dreams
    the innner soul listened to my woes
    his smile made me wry,
    i promised myself to be on toes...............

    hoping for your comments....

  2. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    good one ........
  3. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks abhi....for reading

  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Rohit wonderful feelings expressed very well:rock:
    Listen to your soul as thats when your heart will follow,
    Dont think bout the future and concentrate in your presence;)

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