Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Nov 29, 2004.

  1. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    The general pattern of this poem is highly influenced by another poem I had read titled "Regret", posted anonymously...


    One asked of sorrow, I made reply
    The wilt of a rose, to see it die
    The dawn of day, without a sunrise
    The kiss she gives, as another's bride
    One asked of sorrow, I made reply
    To see the truth and think it a lie
    To hold her close and to hear her sigh
    To find true love, and to see it die
    One asked of sorrow, I made reply
    To dream of heaven, to wish it nigh
    And to disbelieve, to call it a lie.

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  2. Venus

    Venus New Member

    Hey that was really nice, its typical of a poem that i like to read, i.e., poems that start of with a one-liner and then give lists!!!!!!!:) Way to go man.........:)
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Wow. Very good essi.
  4. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    awesome wordings dude !!!
  5. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    good job essi, the other's bride thinggi is sad man
  6. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Thanks y'all...
  7. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Cool lines essi...

  8. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice ryhme
    good work
  9. skaw

    skaw snooze

    nice stuff... essi u were always a poet :)
  10. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    haha... thanks...
  11. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Essi, you rule, man:)

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