soo plastic

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Aug 22, 2009.

  1. hey! behave all so educated
    like cover to cover, line by line
    word by word to the set norms
    im not trying to be iconoclastic
    cant express but soo plastic

    wrapped and wrapped
    in layers all trapped
    so lame then they colour
    the word called sarcastic
    cant express but soo plastic

    the new ones follow
    as if were earlier hollow
    short time to transform
    and chages soo drastic
    cant express but soo plastic
     
  2. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Nice. I loved the rhyme, and the concept is awesome.
    I loved the
    "short time to transform
    and changes soo drastic
    cant express but soo plastic"
    Keep it up, and write more. :)
     
  3. thanks....(snake eyes and a D )..!
     

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